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Inaudible

there is a peace
deep-rooted
that echoes through

as if by some enchantment
its gentle breeze rolls
tumbling in slow motion
toward the lands
barely disturbing
skies of azure blue

wispy clouds serene
quiet and disarming
suspended in mid air
midstream as if
to hold back time

barely a whisper
disturbing the enchantment
of a midsummer afternoon



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on January 1, 2022 for contest A STRAND (1044) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
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Kiser Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 4:47 PM
I long for summer again; yet we have so much winter, yet to get through. Beautiful imagery.
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:49 PM
I see winter as my time to hibernate and rejuvenate.
Inman Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 9:12 AM
A beautiful write Line
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:49 PM
Thanks, James. Much appreciated ~
Stathakis Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 12:15 PM
I love the imagery!
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 3:42 PM
Thank you, George ~
Mcguire Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 5:40 PM
Nice to listen too also!
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 10:45 AM
Thank you very much, Timothy ~
Mcguire Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 5:38 PM
So good a FAV for me!
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 10:44 AM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated ~
Goldsmith Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 7:54 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. Your "INAUDIBLE" is a wonderful write. Have a very blessed day and New Year 2022.............
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 8:07 AM
Thank you very much, Paula. Most appreciated ~ Happy New Year to you and your loved ones!
Radice Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 4:13 AM
Sublime Line. An excellent poem. I echo Gershon's comments and would also like to thank you for all your support for The Soup and for me personally. All the very best for 2022. Cheers - Gary
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Thank you so much, Gary. Most appreciated. Happy New Year to you and yours.
Wolf Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 1:19 PM
This whisper of peace is felt deeply, Line. Lovely penned. Here's to a Healthy and Vibrant 2022. And thank you for all the support you've given on Poetry Soup over these last four years. Cheers, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon ~ very best wishes for the new year to you and yours ~
Skelly Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Line...Best wishes and blessings for 2022.
Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Thanks, Delice. Most appreciated ~
Bayles Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Line the mood is perfectly captured in your enchanting poem.
Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Thanks, Mike. Much appreciated.
Rose  Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 6:56 PM
Ethereally beautiful Line, your poetry is both peaceful and calming, just the way I like it. Have a peaceful evening :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mystic. Most appreciated ~
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