Inarticulate Goodbye

Sweet sun is setting scarlet as red fruit on high,
In a sizzling beauteous exit-apple pie in the sky!


Written on October 4, 2021
For: YOUR BEST RHYMING COUPLET #2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: L MILTON HANKINS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Your "Inarticulate Goodbye" is a beautiful write. Love your sky. Now I want some apple pie. Have a blessed day...................
Buehler Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 10:28 PM
Apple pie does sound nice. :0 Thank you very much.
Jones Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 3:00 PM
Vivid breathtaking such a pleasure to read.
Buehler Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 7:34 PM
You have my heartfelt thanks. :)
Y. Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 5:15 PM
Wow! Evelyn, You penned such a well-written couplet. Stellar content and imagery, my friend. Well done. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 5:22 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis. I'm so honored by your appreciation. Have a lovely evening, Evelyn :D
Buhagiar Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 1:11 AM
Well done Evelyn. You chose wisely.
Buehler Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Thank you, Victor. :)
Strand Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 12:34 AM
Like your images here Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Thank you, Brian. :)
Poet Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:17 PM
Lovely couplet, Evelyn. In just a few words, you conveyed wonderful meanings and hues—best wishes for the contest.
Buehler Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:39 PM
You have my heartfelt thanks for your thoughtful, kind words. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Gorgeous!
Buehler Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:12 PM
Thank you, Kim. :)
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