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Inarticulate Goodbye

Sweet sun is setting scarlet as red fruit on high, In a sizzling beauteous exit-apple pie in the sky! Written on October 4, 2021 For: YOUR BEST RHYMING COUPLET #2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: L MILTON HANKINS

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/8/2021 12:38:00 PM

Your "Inarticulate Goodbye" is a beautiful write. Love your sky. Now I want some apple pie. Have a blessed day...................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/8/2021 10:28:00 PM

Apple pie does sound nice. :0 Thank you very much.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/7/2021 3:00:00 PM

Vivid breathtaking such a pleasure to read.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/7/2021 7:34:00 PM

You have my heartfelt thanks. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2021 5:15:00 PM

Wow! Evelyn, You penned such a well-written couplet. Stellar content and imagery, my friend. Well done. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/6/2021 5:22:00 PM

Thank you very much, Alexis. I'm so honored by your appreciation. Have a lovely evening, Evelyn :D

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/5/2021 1:11:00 AM

Well done Evelyn. You chose wisely.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/5/2021 10:08:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. :)

Brian Strand

Date: 10/5/2021 12:34:00 AM

Like your images here Evelyn

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/5/2021 10:08:00 AM

Thank you, Brian. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/4/2021 7:17:00 PM

Lovely couplet, Evelyn. In just a few words, you conveyed wonderful meanings and hues—best wishes for the contest.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/4/2021 7:39:00 PM

You have my heartfelt thanks for your thoughtful, kind words. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/4/2021 6:54:00 PM

Gorgeous!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/4/2021 7:12:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. :)