Inadequacies' Raptus

In line with crucial curiosity 
 of randomly cohesive insight,
  light integrally depleted
      paradoxically speaking, 
pilfering darkly versed
     memories' surrender,
  captured betwixt poetically 
     incorrect volatility of  
          inadequacies' raptus &
             catastrophic revelations
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 7, 2016 at 9:19 AM
I went to the book store and asked for a Paloma Dictionary...they said they were sold out. It figures. :) Just kidding my friend, your poetry always intrigues me and shows me there is a way out of any poetic box if you have a sharp enough knife and a good sense of directions. This one cut right through me
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December 6, 2016 at 11:27 PM
lol wow!!! Your poems are awesome, you find just the right words combos to get your point across in a powerful way :) I love it!
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December 6, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Si Comprende Mi Amiga. Nicely worded...
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December 6, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Revelation! Not Reason is the key to great wisdom! Great to see your pen at work again my friend! 7/7 You have a unique perspective
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