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In your love

Your love introduced me to the magic world and awakened my spirit like sunflower to sun led me to the garden of feeling and affection where my days passed like dream and nights like wedding…. You taught me to enjoy the beauty and unleashed the secrets of life's duty With you I first sang the poetry of real life With you my imaginations took its first flight. First time I realized the true meaning and essence and enjoyed the words like possessiveness, jealousy and passion. You transformed my solitary life into happy moments and filled the silence of every nights with music. I lived in coma till the time I was in your heart’s ICU And suddenly thrown out from the paradise of love to issues Where the earthly life of luxury and money entice I'm struggling for the rest of my life, hoarding materialistic things.

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Date: 4/26/2016 1:31:00 AM
The poem is very nice, but it is not qasida. As a rule qasida is longer than ghazal, but it follows the same system of rhyme. Check the definition and examples.
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