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In Your Loss I'Ve Lost Myself

Chances were taken In your loss I've lost myself I still choke on your regret Crisscross not straightened Stop hiding under my shelf You carried so much neglect ~Written By: Laura Loo~ ~Date Written: February 9, 2016~

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White Sage

Date: 2/12/2016 10:46:00 AM

well penned sedoka Laura, the theme's perfectly done

Funom Makama

Date: 2/11/2016 9:06:00 AM

A wonder and a bliss, your lines have given my heart a kiss and I am glad on your page, I did not suffer a miss. An outright 7 dear colleague

Lu Loo
Date: 2/11/2016 10:58:00 AM

Thank you Funom :)-luloo

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/10/2016 10:47:00 PM

When in love , a loss can end the world and bring in utter darkness. I am not familiar with tis form but your poem speaks well and the message rings loud and clear. A7

Lu Loo
Date: 2/11/2016 10:57:00 AM

Robert, thank you very much for your kind comments :) *Smiles* -luloo

Katie Bugnacki

Date: 2/10/2016 9:58:00 PM

This is sad to me. Did a loved one pass away? Sorry for your loss. Prayers! KB

Lu Loo
Date: 2/11/2016 10:57:00 AM

Thank you for the prayers KB! I appreciate you popping in and reading my poems. Be blessed! *smiles* -luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 2/9/2016 5:41:00 PM

sad sedoka LuLoo must try this form you have inspired me:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7

Lu Loo
Date: 2/9/2016 6:45:00 PM

Sedoka is one of my fav forms..and I love when they rhyme too-luloo

Lin Lane

Date: 2/9/2016 4:27:00 PM

There's a tightrope to walk in that kind of circumstance. I almost lost myself that way, trying to save someone else. Good sedoka, Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 2/9/2016 6:44:00 PM

thank you Lin...-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2016 3:56:00 PM

This is sad and I like that second line a lot and this kind of theme you chose to do.

Lu Loo
Date: 2/9/2016 3:58:00 PM

Thank you sweet Andrea :) -luloo