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In Your Lockup

sweet and citron voice, fondled a whisper
did you say, "O my Love,  pulling me close 
refreshing spring water,  cooler and crisper 
restless eyes now crave, to forever repose

a vista of orchids, into my soul you dive
where a frantic heart, beats in your fervour
No more secrets, so effortlessly you arrive
in every corner, dreams in vain endeavour

in swarm of thousand kisses, I slowly melt
impetuous arms hug, a wild maddened sea
faintly glowing cinder, every cell now felt
an embrace, in your lockup, you set me free


Dated 7th June  2020

Featured third in  best new poem list
Sponsor	craig cornish
Contest Name	Hugs |

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/28/2020 6:30:00 AM
Debjani, such a captivating poem! Picturesque, breathtaking imageries! Congratulations on your win, Dear Poet! To my faves.
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Date: 6/21/2020 10:13:00 AM
So it goes in my fave right away No prior notice I apologize Picturesque imageries Nice filming my poetic memory enjoyed
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Date: 6/17/2020 1:25:00 AM
Your words are soothing, gorgeous and picturesque at the same time :) What a breathtaking muse! Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/15/2020 10:37:00 AM
what a beautiful embrace, many congrats Dejani:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/9/2020 8:34:00 PM
This is beautiful Debjani, has to be a fave, to read over and over!
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Date: 6/9/2020 7:10:00 AM
Simple beautiful! To my faves...Goodluck for the win!
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Date: 6/7/2020 2:27:00 PM
Hello Deliani Mitra, I enjoyed this poem on embrace. Enjoy your day my friend.
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