Raul Moreno Poet Quatrain

In Your Heart

God’s will came shining,
  When He called Aaron home.
For now he dwells in heaven,
  Next to God, by His throne.

I will pass the words,
  Robin, keep your faith on high.
For one day you’ll reunite,
  Far beyond the blue sky.

And on that distant day,
  Your heart will rejoice.
Up in your place in heaven,
  When you hear Aaron’s voice.

My heart goes out to you,
  It’s sad we must part.
Aaron’ll always be with you,
  Right there, in your heart.





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Robin, if something is missing 
or inaccurate let me know.
Thanks for your appreciated 
and loving comments...Raul

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Steve Edmonds December 18, 2008 at 12:41 AM Wow, that makes me feel closer to the loved ones that I have lost. Caramel

Debbie Guzzi December 17, 2008 at 1:40 PM Your rhyme and meter is great! I have a question which I have posed to others. I was doing the same thing as you before I posed the question (meaning I capitalized the first word of each line). I was given the advice; capitalize the first word in the sentence, and put a period at the end of the sentence. Your first stanza could be 1 sentence or 2.

Daniel Neal December 14, 2008 at 11:30 AM This is sad but nicely written. I like how your work flows til the beautiful end. DN

Elizabeth Neal December 14, 2008 at 11:09 AM Awe, this is really moving and sad. The loss of a loved one is hard and reading this is comforting. God bless you, Aaron, Robin, and her family. Happy Holidays. Love Elizabeth

Juliane Thomas December 14, 2008 at 8:12 AM Another beautiful tribute. You really are very special! Thank you so much for your comments on my poetry. They are truly valued and appreciated. ~Juliane

Sandy Schermerhorn December 13, 2008 at 5:53 PM Raul you are a true gifted writer I have read lots of your writes and have loved them all the tributes are just wonderful this one brought tears to my eyes so sad yet so beautifully written I would also like to thank you for your kind words on some of my poems you are such a kind person and you have such a warm and wonderful heart

Sara Lokken December 13, 2008 at 3:02 PM A beautiful dedication...fulled of heart-felt warmth. Best wishes, Sara:)

Keith Bickerstaffe December 12, 2008 at 1:13 PM Another sad and poignant piece... well composed and rendered, and ultimately redemptive... Best wishes, Keith

Robin L. Gass December 11, 2008 at 8:55 PM Raul, this is so beautiful. It is the perfect compliment to my poem. I don't even know what to say. I am honored by your wonderful gift and I think that you are a kind and generous person. This is a priceless treasure to me. I will never lose faith , I know he is with God. Thank you so much. This is one of the nicest things that anyone has ever given me. What a beautiful soul you have. May god bless you always and keep you in His loving care. Awesome write. Love Robin

Laurie Ginn December 11, 2008 at 5:46 PM Raul this is very beautiful. God bless you Robin. Laurie

Michael Torres December 11, 2008 at 5:43 PM Raul this is beautiful and for someone you care about. That is you reaching touching soul's with your kind love. GBU Michael