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In Your Head

A free world of entertainment,
Sometimes channels you prefer,
Others not,
The minute the head touches the pillow,
Tv! Switches on,
Lifetimes stories,
Flashing right before your closed eyes,
One negative scene after another,
Mostly repeats,
Every little detail highlighted,
Sometimes in bold letters,
Forgotten thoughts appearing,
Reminding you!
The idiot you were,
A magic roundabout of memories,
Invading the head,
Go away I want to sleep,
Count the sheep
Yet the brain continues,
And the clock ticking,
Three A.M in the morning,
You’re telling the voices to shut the!!!
Ok! Make a coffee,
Go to the loo,
Start again,
Focus on the feet,
Meditate,
Blank!
Blank!
Blank!

13/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sietesantos Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 9:49 AM
I can definitely identify with this well-told piece! And it's no joke when I have to be up for work by 5 am! Love it -it tells my story :-) Pandita
Rycroft Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:25 AM
Yes thank you, My story also x
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Nice insomnia poem! Not alone in that fray
Rycroft Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Thank you ingrid
Smith Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 6:38 AM
Well captured Wendy, my nightly ritual I'm afraid. Less the coffee...
Rycroft Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Thank you Charlie xxxxx
Andresen Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 4:44 AM
- ....... Yes, I hear the clock ticking .... and my feet have gone many mil, mind whirling .... no sleep - A great poem, Wendy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 5:22 AM
Thank you Sunshine x
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December 13, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Hahaha! Very good!
Rycroft Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Thank you Mike xxxxxx
Green Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 10:17 AM
definitely a piece I can relate to. Though I finally after so many years of addiction to the tube, shut it off and left it off in the bedroom It took a while but sleep returned. I felt frustration in this one Wendy.
Rycroft Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Thank you, Chris, last night was one of them nights lol
Turner Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Nicely done, Mrs Wendy. I believe I'll have a coffee with you so we can both get cleared up.
Rycroft Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Kettles on x but would you prefer a brandy x Cheers
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