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In Your Dreams

Was it all a sweet dream or just reality?,
  I sit and ponder that very thought,
During the daylight and in the nighttime,
  Wondering, were we ever there or not?

A crescent moon smiled down on me,
  Shedding it's white light upon the ground,
I sat amongst the petals, waiting patiently,
  And it was there, that me, you found.

Lavender flower petals I did pluck,
  As I was seated atop the green hillside,
Does he love me, or does he not?,
  My love for you, I could not hide.

I only saw you as a dark silhouette,
  A shadow that walked upon the ground,
Among silver stars and a midnight sky,
  Your gentle voice was the only sound.

My darkened silhouette was no longer alone,
  While yellow fireflies around me dance,
When you came to join me atop that hill,
  In the meadow's softly illuminated romance.

I was embraced within your arms,
  As your most tender kiss met mine,
On that one warm summer's night,
  When our kindred spirits did entwine.

So sad was I when the time came to part,
  As the rising sun shined golden upon my hair,
Although, what a beautiful dream it was,
  When I awoke and found you there.






       
        Waking Dreams Contest

            April, 4th, 2014




Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/21/2015 5:34:00 PM
Powerful expressions displayed in this winner, Kelly!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/25/2015 11:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dave. I haven't written many romantic poems, so it was fun to try and do something different with this one.
Date: 1/20/2015 7:14:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on another win, with this beautiful write. This time adding it to my favs!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/23/2015 6:55:00 PM
Thank you for coming by once again, Armand. I very much appreciate your kind congrats and the fav!
Date: 1/20/2015 5:29:00 AM
A poem with a touch of romance and passion, congrats on the win, Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/23/2015 6:45:00 PM
I don't write many romantic poems, so it was fun to write this and just try something a bit different... Thank you for your kind comments and congrats, Dr. Ram.
Date: 1/19/2015 10:53:00 PM
What a Lovely passionate write Kelly! Loved to read today! Congrats on big win!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/23/2015 1:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma. I'm very glad you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 1/19/2015 2:19:00 PM
Beautifully written Kelly. Congratulations on your win.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/23/2015 12:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brenda.
Date: 1/18/2015 4:15:00 AM
you build such beautiful sentiments, Kelly.. flowing imagery!.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/21/2015 1:40:00 AM
I really appreciate your nice comments, Nette. Thank you so much! Hugs :)
Date: 1/18/2015 12:47:00 AM
Truly romantic,congrats Kelly...huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/20/2015 12:58:00 AM
Thank you for your nice comments, Kayode. I appreciate it very much... Hugs :)
Date: 1/17/2015 11:15:00 PM
Kelly, your work is like you.. Beautiful! Congrats on your win...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/20/2015 12:30:00 AM
This is one of the nicest comments/compliments that I've gotten, Dave. Thank you so much for it! :)
Date: 1/17/2015 12:48:00 PM
Such a beautiful love poem - many congrats Kelly:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/19/2015 1:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness, Jan... Hugs!
Date: 1/17/2015 12:41:00 PM
"Although, what...found you there." Just beautiful. Very nice.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/19/2015 1:21:00 PM
I really appreciate your kind comments. Thank you so much!
Date: 1/17/2015 10:17:00 AM
This is stunning Kelly. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/18/2015 9:57:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness, Armand. I appreciate it so much!
Date: 1/17/2015 9:54:00 AM
Very beautiful, Kelly. Loved the unexpected ending! Heartfelt congrats on your nice win! Sandra
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/18/2015 9:31:00 PM
I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem, Sandra. Thank you so much for the kind comments and congrats!
Date: 1/17/2015 5:24:00 AM
Back once more for a second read and with merited congratulations, Kelly. Poem sounds as lovely and romantic as ever! Hugs // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/18/2015 9:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem for the second time. I truly appreciate the kind congrats! Hugs :)
Date: 1/17/2015 4:29:00 AM
Nicely expressed poem on love, congrats on the in, Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/18/2015 8:56:00 PM
I really appreciate your nice comments and kind congrats, Dr. Ram. Thank you very much!
Date: 5/18/2014 9:54:00 AM
A masterpiece that ends with all being right in the world! Wonderful writing , truly wonderful!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/20/2014 1:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert. Your kind comments really meant a lot to me! This is one of my favorite poems that I've written, so far.
Date: 4/19/2014 2:35:00 PM
Truly beautifully penned kelly excellently crafted piece
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/20/2014 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Liam. I really do appreciate your kind comments, my friend! :)
Date: 4/18/2014 11:01:00 AM
A poem with a happy ending...a dream come true; very romantic :) // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/20/2014 5:14:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Paul. I appreciate it very much. :)
Date: 4/17/2014 9:56:00 PM
I quite enjoyed this read, very enchanting!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/19/2014 6:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Arthur. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 4/17/2014 2:11:00 AM
as usual this is stunning Kelly the tenderness is heart warming and the feeling of being there floods through fantastic pen
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/19/2014 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Shadow. It really means a lot coming from you. :)
Date: 4/16/2014 12:57:00 PM
Good morning Kelly, thanks for being such a good sport and adding me to your winners list for your Women's Only contest. I have enjoyed reading through and commenting on all the entries. There were some very impactful entries. Congratulations on your own win with this dreamy piece.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/19/2014 1:03:00 PM
Good afternoon, Richard, you are very welcome. I appreciated the effort that you put into your entry, so it did deserve the recognition. I also appreciate you congratulating all of the winners. There were many, many powerful poems, and it was difficult to judge them...Thank you so much for stopping by with such kind words. :)
Date: 4/14/2014 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful winning poem Kelly. Enchanting!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/15/2014 10:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Connie! :)
Date: 4/13/2014 10:35:00 PM
This is just perfect.. A beautiful poem with a fantastic ending.. A well deserved winner Kelly !
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/14/2014 5:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dave. Your kind comments meant a lot to me! :)
Date: 4/11/2014 12:46:00 AM
What a nice poem. It was a pleasure to read--thanks for sharing it. Love the ending, by the way. Drop by when you get the chance. hugs // mel // :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/12/2014 4:29:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Mel. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. I will be dropping by shortly! Hugs :)
Date: 4/10/2014 8:35:00 PM
I love this beautiful ending to the dream. what a romantic poem!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/12/2014 4:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one! :)
Date: 4/10/2014 10:45:00 AM
Very lovely write Kelly ! I hv never liked parting moments since they truly sadden ! Congrats on fine win !
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/11/2014 10:28:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Dr. Upma. And, I agree, parting is such sweet sorrow! :)
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