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In Your Breezy Embrace

I stand barefoot in the golden yellow sand, yearning for your tender touch, as you steadily approach with gentle steps; I see the vast sea softly dousing the shore, and my words come out in a gasp of sob, as I utter your name in fond hope; Come, oh love, breathe life into my weary soul and wrap around me playfully, touching my warm cheeks with your cool breath; Hearing your soft murmur of angst wafting smoothly into my ears, I whisper in your ears my aches of love and heave a sigh of soothing relief.. Date: 04/30/2021 Submitted for: Writing Prompt - Breathe - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 5/12/2021 3:27:00 AM
Beautiful Work.
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Date: 5/11/2021 5:07:00 PM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully penned poem, well done, love _Constance
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Date: 5/9/2021 8:47:00 PM
Only a tender, loving heart could have penned this! Congrats on your win, Anitha!
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Date: 5/9/2021 3:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Anitha, on your win with this beautiful, romantic, passionate poem. "I stand barefoot in the golden yellow sand" - that picture touches my heart. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 4/30/2021 4:36:00 PM
ahhh, this is gorgeous. I think Constance will adore it.
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Date: 4/30/2021 11:24:00 AM
Hello Anitha, this is so romantic. Hugs blessings my friend. Darlene
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Date: 4/30/2021 5:59:00 AM
I think this poem is going places. So well written. I simply loved reading again and again. Best for a top win.
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