In Your Breezy Embrace

I stand barefoot in the golden yellow sand, 
yearning for your tender touch, 
as you steadily approach with gentle steps;

I see the vast sea softly dousing the shore, 
and my words come out in a gasp of sob, 
as I utter your name in fond hope;

Come, oh love, breathe life into my weary soul
and wrap around me playfully, 
touching my warm cheeks with your cool breath;

Hearing your soft murmur of angst
wafting smoothly into my ears, 
I whisper in your ears my aches of love
and heave a sigh of soothing relief.. 


Date: 04/30/2021
Submitted for: Writing Prompt - Breathe - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 3:27 AM
Beautiful Work.
La France Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully penned poem, well done, love _Constance
Seeker Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 8:47 PM
Only a tender, loving heart could have penned this! Congrats on your win, Anitha!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 3:06 PM
Congratulations, Dear Anitha, on your win with this beautiful, romantic, passionate poem. "I stand barefoot in the golden yellow sand" - that picture touches my heart. Love ~ Mala
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 4:36 PM
ahhh, this is gorgeous. I think Constance will adore it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Hello Anitha, this is so romantic. Hugs blessings my friend. Darlene
Buhagiar Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:59 AM
I think this poem is going places. So well written. I simply loved reading again and again. Best for a top win.
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