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In Your Blue Eyes




Let me come too close to you now so close that I can hear every breath to be lost in the depth of those eyes. Let me kiss your emerald eyes that sea in which my boat is lost now, before sinking,whisper of your breath. Just for once mingle with my breath, just for once in your emerald eyes with its love,this heart wants to sink now. Now my breath grasping in your blue eyes!

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Date: 3/16/2013 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Kash! Always, Audrey
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Date: 3/14/2013 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem Kash ...Donna
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Date: 3/13/2013 10:18:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. The eyes do have it ;)Light & Love
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Date: 3/11/2013 4:42:00 PM
Beautiful piece,Kash..Great job...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Kudos to you...
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Date: 3/11/2013 6:51:00 AM
Wonderful win in this contest! Congrats!
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:30:00 PM
KASH, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:03:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Kash
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Date: 3/10/2013 10:15:00 AM
Once again...............I have said it before........you have the best gift for romance.....just breathtaking! Congratulations, dear Kash...my honor to share a place with you!
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Date: 3/10/2013 8:48:00 AM
wow!! so sweet....so romantic!! Congratulations on your win friend Kash. Cheers!!! Hugs, Maria
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Kash xx
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:27:00 AM
Kash, congrats on your win, excellent verse...David
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:17:00 AM
This is also a very sweet and romantic poem my dear friend Kash! I love it! My big hearty congratulations also on your marvelous win! Thank you so much! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/10/2013 6:41:00 AM
Kash congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/9/2013 11:56:00 PM
Kash, I loved yours. I would have put it at third place except you said she had green eyes by calling them emerald eyes. She has blue eyes, silly, that would make them sapphires! hahaha. Congrats, you did marvelously with this form.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/10/2013 2:11:00 PM
You are learning so many new things here. Now you know the names of the gems!!!
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kash poet
Date: 3/10/2013 4:06:00 AM
Thanks for my placement :)
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Date: 3/10/2013 4:04:00 AM
At that moment I was not in a condition to distinguish between Blue,Green,Sapphiire,Emerald:)))
Date: 2/24/2013 11:17:00 PM
my dear poet Kashi... this is so romantic..<3 like it much <3 Sk
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Date: 2/24/2013 3:58:00 AM
Awesome, Kash...romantic poems seem to be your specialty...more please! - Tim
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Date: 2/23/2013 7:56:00 PM
Very very romantic kash
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Date: 2/23/2013 5:50:00 PM
Such beauty within these awesome and tender lines my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! You have put me in awe with your glorious piece that you have written here! What a sentimental poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/23/2013 3:57:00 PM
Kash, thank you for your sweet and romantic poetry today. - Love it! - Have a peaceful weekend, relax! -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2013 3:25:00 PM
I loved this......and the form has no hesitation.....it flows without seeming intended....(this one came harder for me) yours seems so natural and lovely!
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Date: 2/23/2013 1:59:00 PM
Oh Kash, this makes mine look like a school girls...this is beautiful Ill be surrised if its not a BIG winner. BG
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