Kash Poet Poet Sestina

In Your Blue Eyes

Let me come too close to you now
so close that I can hear every breath
to be lost in the depth of those eyes.

Let me kiss your emerald eyes
that sea in which my boat is lost now,
before sinking,whisper of your breath.

Just for once mingle with my breath,
just for once in your emerald eyes
with its love,this heart wants to sink now.

Now my breath grasping in your blue eyes!

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Audrey Haick March 16, 2013 at 4:25 PM Congratulations on a very fine win, Kash! Always, Audrey

Donna Jones March 14, 2013 at 6:28 PM Congratulations on a great poem Kash ...Donna

Debbie Guzzi March 13, 2013 at 10:18 AM Congrad's on your win. So nice to read a new form. The eyes do have it ;)Light & Love

Olusegun Arowolo March 11, 2013 at 4:42 PM Beautiful piece,Kash..Great job...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Kudos to you...

Painted Hunter March 11, 2013 at 6:51 AM Wonderful win in this contest! Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A March 10, 2013 at 9:30 PM KASH, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

Joseph May March 10, 2013 at 12:03 PM congrats on a fine win Kash

Carrie Richards March 10, 2013 at 10:15 AM Once again...............I have said it before........you have the best gift for romance.....just breathtaking! Congratulations, dear Kash...my honor to share a place with you!

Bukang Liwayway March 10, 2013 at 8:48 AM wow!! so sweet....so romantic!! Congratulations on your win friend Kash. Cheers!!! Hugs, Maria

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 10, 2013 at 7:45 AM Congratulations on your winning place Kash xx

David Williams March 10, 2013 at 7:27 AM Kash, congrats on your win, excellent verse...David

Len Gasun March 10, 2013 at 7:17 AM This is also a very sweet and romantic poem my dear friend Kash! I love it! My big hearty congratulations also on your marvelous win! Thank you so much! love/hugs, Leonora

Connie Gildersleeve March 10, 2013 at 6:41 AM Kash congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2013 at 11:56 PM Kash, I loved yours. I would have put it at third place except you said she had green eyes by calling them emerald eyes. She has blue eyes, silly, that would make them sapphires! hahaha. Congrats, you did marvelously with this form. Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2013 at 2:11 PM You are learning so many new things here. Now you know the names of the gems!!! Kash Poet March 10, 2013 at 4:06 AM Thanks for my placement :) Kash Poet March 10, 2013 at 4:04 AM At that moment I was not in a condition to distinguish between Blue,Green,Sapphiire,Emerald:)))

Sukmawati Komala February 24, 2013 at 11:17 PM my dear poet Kashi... this is so romantic..<3 like it much <3 Sk

Tim Ryerson February 24, 2013 at 3:58 AM Awesome, Kash...romantic poems seem to be your specialty...more please! - Tim

Donna Jones February 23, 2013 at 7:56 PM Very very romantic kash

Russell Sivey February 23, 2013 at 5:50 PM Such beauty within these awesome and tender lines my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! You have put me in awe with your glorious piece that you have written here! What a sentimental poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2013 at 3:57 PM Kash, thank you for your sweet and romantic poetry today. - Love it! - Have a peaceful weekend, relax! -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards February 23, 2013 at 3:25 PM I loved this......and the form has no hesitation.....it flows without seeming intended....(this one came harder for me) yours seems so natural and lovely!

Barbara Gorelick February 23, 2013 at 1:59 PM Oh Kash, this makes mine look like a school girls...this is beautiful Ill be surrised if its not a BIG winner. BG