In Winter's Freeze

From heaven above, white powder falls as trembling in the icy breeze shadows loom on my garden walls. They tremble along with the limbs of trees quaking naked in winter’s freeze. I watch those shadows on display and shiver too – down to my bone as limbs forlornly in my garden sway to the sound of wind, a fearful moan. Wind stops! The frail limbs have thicker grown! Those shadows once had been so frail before the wind ceased to blow. Now they tell a different tale. for mimicking the trees, they show that the branches now wear coats of snow! Feb. 10, 2022 for Emile Pinet's Quintain (English) Poetry Contest
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Hind Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 6:47 PM
Gorgeous writing, Andrea! Loved this-
Alex Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 9:45 PM
"tremble along with the limbs of trees", "as limbs forlornly in my garden sway", "Now they tell a different tale" - Wonderful. Congratulations!
George Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 7:01 PM
Hi Andrea, back to your poem with congratulations on your win in the Premium contest and all other contests whose results have been announced today! Enjoy your day !
Hutchings Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations, Andrea! Each of your verses are so beautifully written and easy to visualize! Not only do you paint a glorious picture with your words, but the rhyme flows smoothly and makes the poem even more outstanding! Well done! Much love...Meghan
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March 17, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your wonderful poem "In Winter's Freeze," has placed "Second" in my contest. It was a difficult contest to judge for I was very strict, but your poem rose to a top podium finish. Very well done my friend, Emile.
Laurie Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Hello Andrea ... apart from really enjoying the scene you wrote; the rhyme scheme is truly great and presented beautifully - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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February 17, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Your imagery is exquisitely compelling Andrea.
Skelly Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 3:17 AM
Andrea, can identify with the line "to the sound of wind, a fearful moan" Our house is being battered by a heavy wind right now. It was at it right through the night also but alas no snow...Delice
Baker Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 11:40 PM
Lovely imagery brings a sense of heaviness and cold. I got the shivers, Andrea. Well written in form, a great entry for the contest. Have a joyful week, my friend, Bill
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February 15, 2022 at 7:33 AM
Lovely observations of a winter scene with a pleasing metaphor at the end; skilfully constructed as a quintain. Nicely done Andrea
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 4:21 AM
Beautiful!
Jayasankar Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 10:03 AM
This is such a lovely write, showing the exact winter scene dear Ria.... Loved the last two lines, specially... Sorry, my friend...I haven't been reading yours and other dear poets' poems for some time now, as I couldn't get much time for Soup... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
Maverick Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Good work on this one Andrea, may it go well In the contest, best wishes for a win.'
George Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 4:40 AM
A lovely entry for the contest on the winter scene ! Win big Andrea !
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 12, 2022 at 3:51 PM
You have formed this lovely poem with a shadow being the star which I find so ingenious. A very beautiful piece Andrea. I think Emile will appreciate it for his contest. I think it is stellar! Blessings xxoo
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February 11, 2022 at 6:12 PM
What a beautiful poem on the winter season! Gorgeous that the limbs have now been blanketed in snow, thicker and beautiful after the terrifying wind and biting chill have passed.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 9:35 AM
Love that the branches now wear coats of snow, thickened and beautiful after the fearful wind and flaky chill quit.
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 8:34 PM
love the line branches now wear coats. Love it.
Skelly Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 1:55 PM
Lovely well observed snowy poem, most enjoyable….Delice
Cunningham Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 10:48 AM
You captured winter well in your verse Andrea, I can feel the chill. Good luck Tom
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February 10, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Andrea, i think that this is one of your BEST poems, all your poems are excellent, but this one stands all on its own and very proudly so! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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February 10, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Such wonderful imagery throughout Andrea. You bring forth the scenes in expressive details--shadows shiver--limbs forlorn--wind moans! Into my FAVES.
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