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In What Design

Your smile warms my heart
Never see it so often but
It's always there when I see you
The long hours of talking
Neither of us wanting to go up to sleep
Our heads were held up
But our pinkies were close
I felt your gaze as you turned
Towards me
Our destinies were tied
But in what design
I cannot see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/6/2019 7:14:00 AM
Nice write, Rinnaka, existential questions. Keep up the good work.
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Shimokini The Abendrot Poet
Date: 11/6/2019 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Phil Capitano!! :D I really believe that the deep existential questions are the best ingredients for good poetry :)))))

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