In westbound breezes

in westbound breezes
weeping willow branches sway
    rainbow paints the sky
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Cunningham Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:01 AM
You certainly payed attention Line, just working my way through all your haikus, soon as I see them, the image appears in my mind. Tom.
Talbot Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 2:53 AM
haiku ink and a haiku trained quill you are endowed with both, hence your skill.
Hinshaw Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Line, you are truly an expert at crafting haiku! Well done - Bob
Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 8:52 PM
Thank you so much, Robert. I hear though there is no such thing... one can only try.
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