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(sometimes poetry has to express itself in the simplicity of your heart. i term this type of poem as bedroom poetry. you don't need to be Byron or Shelly just a man with the woman he loves. your poem has to be as gentle as a KISS, keep it simple, Stupid!!)
i love you not because you have special talents although you have many not because you’re beautiful though i know any artist would be thrilled to display you on canvas i love you not because of your mild nature you are gentle or because you’re a genius i do love listening to you speak i love you sometimes life will get the better of you i expect you will make mistakes you should know we all have a dark side i will always be there with a light the way you have been a beacon for me i love you dressed to the hilt for a night out first thing in the morning after a bad night when you agree with me think I'm out in left field when you hand me the converter hide it in another country i love you unconditionally happy you're with me

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Date: 9/11/2014 11:37:00 PM
She is a very fortunate woman and she no doubt, loves you just as much. What a beautiful sentiment.
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:16:00 AM
how beautiful :) i hope she enjoys your words, for they are truly touching and kind and invigorating. thank you for stopping by my work! -Juli-Michelle
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 6:23:00 PM
thank you. you are very kind.
Date: 9/10/2014 11:33:00 PM
ahhh, I just read this one. I love it!! And it is NOT simple stupid.Or did you mean to say keep it simple, Stupid!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 12:03:00 AM
thank you for the clue on how to communicate "keep it simple, Stupid!!". lots of love.
Date: 9/10/2014 11:32:00 PM
haha. I love what you said on my kiss poem. You have such a great sense of humor!! Tell yourself not to die! Good one.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 11:58:00 PM
i always try to make you laugh when I can.
Date: 9/10/2014 7:52:00 PM
That's sweet my friend...cheers
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/10/2014 7:58:00 PM
Funny..50 first dates was just on.....Maybe tomorrow
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 7:56:00 PM
yeah that's all fine but how come you never write a poem with me in it?
Date: 9/10/2014 7:43:00 PM
Hey you are catching up with Tim for the romantic writes title Maurice - I especially love the lines 'sometimes life will get the better of you i expect you will make mistakes you should know we all have a dark side i will always be there with a light the way you have been a beacon for me' is the title based on Tim's wardrobe? :-) Hugs Jan x
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/10/2014 7:53:00 PM
I only wear the best :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/10/2014 7:49:00 PM
HaHaHaHa!
Date: 9/10/2014 7:37:00 PM
WOW, That is sweet... My man loves me, just the way I am. No, secret, just sweat pants and a pony tail. Life got the best of me, but so does he... I HOPE!....LOL.... Mean While In Another Country, you have been tagged, by PD....>:)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/11/2014 6:24:00 PM
this is a leftover.

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