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In Utah's Salt Lake

When in Utah, fat Patty took note
on the surface of Salt Lake, folks float.
So she took a great jump,
but she sank like a lump,
and her splash could have capsized a boat!

July 18, 2019

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James Inman Date: 10/13/2019 2:55:00 PM Reading a few of yours, sorry not much time for comments. Clever and humorous. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/14/2019 11:41:00 AM You made a splash with this humorous Limerick, Andrea! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/13/2019 5:59:00 PM Poor Patty! Congratulations, Andrea! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/13/2019 1:34:00 AM absolutely hilarious Andrea and clever too:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 9/11/2019 7:48:00 PM Bravo, Andrea! I love your delightfully cute and funny limerick. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 9/11/2019 4:30:00 PM Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/11/2019 4:19:00 PM Cute!! Congrats on your win in the contest, Andrea. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 7/21/2019 7:51:00 PM G'day Andrea ... even salt water won't keep the likes of Fat Patty afloat, in fact a tsunami can result - very good Andrea - Lindsay Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 7/21/2019 11:57:00 AM Fat Patty must be very happy...nice Limerick Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 7/20/2019 7:29:00 PM Poor Patty, poor boat - great limerick! I haven't had any state/limerick inspiration YET - not giving up. Love, CayCay Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/20/2019 1:32:00 AM Wow! Nice limerick my friend. Made me laugh. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/19/2019 9:30:00 AM Love it! I feel for Patty but hope she enjoyed the splash she made! Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/19/2019 1:00:00 AM Excellent write with great imagery and fun. Enjoyed reading it. Login to Reply

Rhona Mcferran Date: 7/18/2019 10:50:00 PM Hahahaa!! Love this limerick- terrific write! ;D Login to Reply

Ann Foster Date: 7/18/2019 10:19:00 PM LOL... I can see this one. Made me think of poetry in fourth grade, too fun. I love it. Ann Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 7/18/2019 9:41:00 PM Funny stuff! I am working through the end of this month 4 days a week teaching students so they can pass the CATW exam - they can't graduate unless they pass it. I have been out for a few dates with a woman I knew years ago. She writes poetry! and she is Jewish! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/18/2019 9:13:00 PM Excellent, Andrea! Janice Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 7/18/2019 5:45:00 PM gotta keep an eye out for those Old Salts! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 7/18/2019 5:28:00 PM Poor patty the fatty lol. Nice one Andrea. Good luck. Tom Login to Reply

Ralph Sergi Date: 7/18/2019 4:58:00 PM Hi Andrea: This funny limerick lightens the drama of a serious poem! Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 7/18/2019 3:49:00 PM LOL a fun limerick, Andrea. Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 7/18/2019 3:33:00 PM LOL...Love it! Best wishes for a win in the contest. :) Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 7/18/2019 3:32:00 PM Lol! Andrea, This is so funny. I laughed out loud with this one. Great imagery. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply