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In Utah's Salt Lake

When in Utah, fat Patty took note on the surface of Salt Lake, folks float. So she took a great jump, but she sank like a lump, and her splash could have capsized a boat! July 18, 2019

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James Inman

Date: 10/13/2019 2:55:00 PM

Reading a few of yours, sorry not much time for comments. Clever and humorous.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/14/2019 11:41:00 AM

You made a splash with this humorous Limerick, Andrea! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/13/2019 5:59:00 PM

Poor Patty! Congratulations, Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2019 1:34:00 AM

absolutely hilarious Andrea and clever too:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/11/2019 7:48:00 PM

Bravo, Andrea! I love your delightfully cute and funny limerick.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/11/2019 4:30:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/11/2019 4:19:00 PM

Cute!! Congrats on your win in the contest, Andrea. Best wishes, Gershon

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/21/2019 7:51:00 PM

G'day Andrea ... even salt water won't keep the likes of Fat Patty afloat, in fact a tsunami can result - very good Andrea - Lindsay

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/21/2019 11:57:00 AM

Fat Patty must be very happy...nice Limerick

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/20/2019 7:29:00 PM

Poor Patty, poor boat - great limerick! I haven't had any state/limerick inspiration YET - not giving up. Love, CayCay

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/20/2019 1:32:00 AM

Wow! Nice limerick my friend. Made me laugh.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2019 9:30:00 AM

Love it! I feel for Patty but hope she enjoyed the splash she made!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/19/2019 1:00:00 AM

Excellent write with great imagery and fun. Enjoyed reading it.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 7/18/2019 10:50:00 PM

Hahahaa!! Love this limerick- terrific write! ;D

Ann Foster

Date: 7/18/2019 10:19:00 PM

LOL... I can see this one. Made me think of poetry in fourth grade, too fun. I love it. Ann

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/18/2019 9:41:00 PM

Funny stuff! I am working through the end of this month 4 days a week teaching students so they can pass the CATW exam - they can't graduate unless they pass it. I have been out for a few dates with a woman I knew years ago. She writes poetry! and she is Jewish! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/18/2019 9:13:00 PM

Excellent, Andrea! Janice