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In Trance - Win

I saw her once At a glance and In trance I stood. My heart was light Walked with light step But light waned out. Heard her foot near Was all ears but Oh, fear crept in. Looked at her face Could not place her Chased to see her. Then she was nigh Heard her sigh still Felt pry on me. +++ Date 23-11-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Form Than bauk Sixth Place Win Contest: Any Poem Goes # 15 by Linda

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Date: 4/10/2014 10:56:00 PM
I think everyone can relate to this poem. You captured this moment so well here. Congratulations on your win, as well, Dr. Ram!...Thank you for the kind congrats!
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Date: 4/9/2014 2:09:00 PM
What a fabulous win here..congrats Tim
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Date: 4/9/2014 10:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:46:00 AM
A fine win Dr. Ram
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:35:00 AM
Lovely write Dr Ram ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 4/9/2014 3:43:00 AM
DR RAM, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest...:) LINDA
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:51:00 AM
:) it was a good one :)
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/9/2014 9:46:00 AM
Hi Linda, thanks for my placement
Date: 11/26/2013 10:59:00 PM
Beautiful write :) And thank you very much for your comments <3
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Date: 11/23/2013 10:12:00 PM
Hi Dr. Ram, this is a wonderful than-bauk and a beautiful, unforgettable moment! I enjoyed reading it tonight! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/23/2013 2:02:00 PM
Aw...it reminds me about love at the first sight kind of story. I love the scenery, Dr Ram..Good luck with the contest.. :))
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:42:00 AM
Memorable once-in-a lifetime scene! Thank you for reading me and good luck in this contest.
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Date: 11/22/2013 8:23:00 PM
Hello Dr Ram, this one is mysterious... Reminds me of a song called.. "Don't Stand So Close To ME." ;) good one...Linda
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