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In Thy Mourning

Dawning never lasts

Snowflakes melt like history

Beauty grieves on graves

Copyright © White Wolf | Year Posted 2017

beautydeathlifesymbolismhaiku

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Patricia Cresswell

August 20, 2017 at 10:37 AM

As delicate as Irish lace.

July 29, 2017 at 4:20 PM

Very sad and well-written Haiku, WW. Nicely done! Regards, John.

July 11, 2017 at 6:51 AM

Hello Mr. White Wolf. The format is executed with perfection. Your theme is marvelous. And yes, everything say poetry. Your expression here is poetic starting with the title. Honestly. Read back your words and you will see the poeticness. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful night.

July 11, 2017 at 6:53 AM

Thank you, Lisa! For your encouraging words tonight /|\

July 11, 2017 at 6:13 AM

Sadly beautiful my friend. This is deep and affecting, touching many who read I am sure. Really nice.

July 11, 2017 at 6:26 AM

Thank you, Chris /|\

July 11, 2017 at 4:04 AM

Excellent Haiku WW, probably one of the best that I have read, brilliant, :))

July 11, 2017 at 4:09 AM

Thank you very much, Roy /|\

July 11, 2017 at 3:52 AM

Excellent flow in this Haiku.

July 11, 2017 at 4:09 AM

Thanks a lot /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 11, 2017 at 2:34 AM

Superbly written my friend, WW!

July 11, 2017 at 2:40 AM

Thank you very much, Demetrios /|\

July 10, 2017 at 10:34 PM

Beautiful in its twist of words.

July 11, 2017 at 2:38 AM

Thank you, Kim /|\

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