In This Moment

These soft petals falls on your golden hair
And created magic so sweet and so fair.
Like the sun's complexion bright
A soft crimson streaming light.

Dawn has come and we tread together
In the stillness of the air
In the silence of the fields and pastures
Beneath the skies painted fair.

We hold hands and a silent submission
Of tongues intertwined, in this love recession
Electric shocks, soothing play of aggression
Soft and slow into the fire of the night.

Musk-rose falls down petals on milky way, chocolate smooth lips
Fever running wild, immortal love grips.
Tantalizing pleasures sways in the rosy night
In every throbbing heartbeat in the crystal light.

Pigeons, Seagulls, Turtle doves, those signs of love
Clouds form words with silver pens above.
In regions of ice, that seem to entice
Regions of fire, soaked with desire.

We watch the blushing sun arise, you are in my arms
The soothing air lashes our backs, love alarms.
So sweet a magic we created in the air 
In this moment!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mcdaid Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 6:47 AM
there goes peter pan still looking for the tight mick has them under a silver moon
Deschler Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 1:47 PM
Very romantic piece of poetry that you've written here! I can definitely see the similarity in our styles when it comes to the imagery. Very nicely done! And, thank you for reading my poem "Serenity", and for your great comments. It really means so much!
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 10:15 AM
the magic this was that created this write is just pulling the reader in, I just fell in love with your poetry again, much love ~always, Linda
Haick Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Romance at its finest, Mustapha! Enjoyed fully! Always, Annalise
Onclaud Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 3:07 PM
savoring your momentm mus... fine write as always; greeeat mood!..:) huggggs
Mohammed Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 7:37 PM
Dear Nette, thanks for your kind review. Hugs to you.
Roberts Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 12:26 AM
Nice one Mustapha .......Seren
Mohammed Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 1:16 AM
Thank you Seren for your kind review. Nice to see you.
Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 11:47 PM
What colorful romance with intense feeling of love
Mohammed Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 1:15 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram for your kind review. Much appreciated.
Thomas Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Woe m this is oozing with romance hmmmm what. a lovely write, you paint a sweet picture in the mind,,, really enjoyed reading this piece today Thankyou my friend:)
Mohammed Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 1:13 AM
Thank you Cherie for your kind review friend. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 7:23 PM
Beautiful and romantic piece.
Mohammed Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 1:11 AM
Thank you Richard for your kind review. So nice to hear from you.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 3:06 PM
Hey, this one kind of goes along with my vibrant dream idea, except you are with a wonderful lover in that beauty of nature!!!
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:10 PM
Thank you Andrea for your kind review on my poem. Its so nice to hear from you.
Hairomis Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 12:17 PM
A lovely poem. My only issue is with "red crimson" ...crimson is red, redundant. Pleasure to read otherwise.
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:04 PM
Thank you Simoriah for your kind review. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 12:12 PM
- This is beautiful, Mustapha !!!!! ...... a pleasure to read your new poem today ! - oxox // Anne-Lise
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Thanks for your kind review Anne- Lise. So nice to hear from you today
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