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In This Moment

These soft petals falls on your golden hair And created magic so sweet and so fair. Like the sun's complexion bright A soft crimson streaming light. Dawn has come and we tread together In the stillness of the air In the silence of the fields and pastures Beneath the skies painted fair. We hold hands and a silent submission Of tongues intertwined, in this love recession Electric shocks, soothing play of aggression Soft and slow into the fire of the night. Musk-rose falls down petals on milky way, chocolate smooth lips Fever running wild, immortal love grips. Tantalizing pleasures sways in the rosy night In every throbbing heartbeat in the crystal light. Pigeons, Seagulls, Turtle doves, those signs of love Clouds form words with silver pens above. In regions of ice, that seem to entice Regions of fire, soaked with desire. We watch the blushing sun arise, you are in my arms The soothing air lashes our backs, love alarms. So sweet a magic we created in the air In this moment!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/3/2013 6:47:00 AM
there goes peter pan still looking for the tight mick has them under a silver moon
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Date: 9/1/2013 1:47:00 PM
Very romantic piece of poetry that you've written here! I can definitely see the similarity in our styles when it comes to the imagery. Very nicely done! And, thank you for reading my poem "Serenity", and for your great comments. It really means so much!
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Date: 8/31/2013 10:15:00 AM
the magic this was that created this write is just pulling the reader in, I just fell in love with your poetry again, much love ~always, Linda
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Date: 8/30/2013 8:50:00 PM
Romance at its finest, Mustapha! Enjoyed fully! Always, Annalise
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Date: 8/30/2013 3:07:00 PM
savoring your momentm mus... fine write as always; greeeat mood!..:) huggggs
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 7:37:00 PM
Dear Nette, thanks for your kind review. Hugs to you.
Date: 8/30/2013 12:26:00 AM
Nice one Mustapha .......Seren
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 1:16:00 AM
Thank you Seren for your kind review. Nice to see you.
Date: 8/29/2013 11:47:00 PM
What colorful romance with intense feeling of love
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 1:15:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram for your kind review. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/29/2013 7:35:00 PM
Woe m this is oozing with romance hmmmm what. a lovely write, you paint a sweet picture in the mind,,, really enjoyed reading this piece today Thankyou my friend:)
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 1:13:00 AM
Thank you Cherie for your kind review friend. Hugs
Date: 8/29/2013 7:23:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic piece.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 1:11:00 AM
Thank you Richard for your kind review. So nice to hear from you.
Date: 8/29/2013 3:06:00 PM
Hey, this one kind of goes along with my vibrant dream idea, except you are with a wonderful lover in that beauty of nature!!!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:10:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your kind review on my poem. Its so nice to hear from you.
Date: 8/29/2013 12:17:00 PM
A lovely poem. My only issue is with "red crimson" ...crimson is red, redundant. Pleasure to read otherwise.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Simoriah for your kind review. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
Date: 8/29/2013 12:12:00 PM
- This is beautiful, Mustapha !!!!! ...... a pleasure to read your new poem today ! - oxox // Anne-Lise
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/29/2013 5:03:00 PM
Thanks for your kind review Anne- Lise. So nice to hear from you today

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