In This House

...youth’s awakening eyes witnessed
the loss of heritage of light.
Shadows constantly calling,
bringing a nearness to the secretive night.

A surge of crimson droplets -
a soothing sense of control of fears.
Still, a darkness grows,
devouring hopes, over many years.

A purgatory of shame,
leaves a gasp for an agony of death.
Pelting rain and howling winds,
fill the chambers and captures ones breath.

The storm keeps raging - 
birthing a bolstering darkness.
Pain: Persistent. Paralyzing
a mind leaking what is broken.

Quivering, in a darkening dream I lay -
alone.
Shadows, still, calling me home.
Leaving me to rot, reprieve - to atone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 9:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Juanita.
Oosthuizen Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 10:50 PM
Thank you!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Juanita. I liked this part especially well: "Pain: Persistent. Paralyzing a mind leaking what is broken." Very soul-fully written.
Oosthuizen Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thank you so much!
Elam Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Beautiful rhythms. Haunting.
Oosthuizen Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thank you!
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