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                                              your fingertips trace the story of
                                                                                                  us . .

We met in a black and white world

. . Somehow
I have become
    your simple touch of
                          love

just caressing your haven
      with color

Moments whisper softly
along almond waves
                of serenity,
lips of a true magenta sunset

It seems every time you follow
       these curves,

 

                                             A new memory is made,
                                                        between your heart and mine
                                                                           ___________

In These Curves

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Tor Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 7:43 PM
This is an older poem of yours Brandy I read the comments and there is some naughtiness going around lol. It is funny to watch men react to a lovely women like yourself. Their hormonal comments turn them into children. I love how you kindly responded probably laughing inside of the boldness they display. You handle them so well and polite. Kudos to you for being so kind.God bless you for it...
Nicole Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 7:43 PM
Dear Michael, first of all, thank you for reading this older poem of mine. It's been a while since I've visited these words. Second, you're right, there's a little naughtiness within some comments. Perhaps the title is a little playful. I appreciate you noticing my behavior and how I handle myself. Thank you for saying I've handled this in a polite way. A poetic way. I appreciate your kind words and all your compliments, about me and my poetry. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pickett Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 2:15 PM
Girl, I'd follow your curves anywhere. Good lord, your way with words is intoxicating. Who needs alcohol when I'm drunk on your written word.. I'm infatuated!! We definitely need to collaborate on at least one poem together. We would set this mother on fire. Much like Sweetheart and i did over 10 years ago..
Nicole Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 12:59 PM
Oh, my ! I'm breathless with these thoughts. You saying you'd follow my curves anywhere and that your drunk on my written word. Such a wonderful thing to say to me. Thank you, Jared. I'm smiling and floating at this moment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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December 31, 2022 at 7:46 AM
Hi Brandy, Good to hear from you, I've not written any fresh poetry either for well before Christmas though I've been putting on some old material which many soupers may not have read. Looking forward to some new material from your loving pen in the new year. So have a very blessed 2023, love and hugs, Gordon
Nicole Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 8:38 PM
:) Such a good idea. Sometimes placing older poems up, helps the muse. I appreciate you and your friendship. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Thank you, Gordon. May you have a wonderful year. Hugs, love and blessings. :) Brandy
Mcconnell Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 4:20 AM
Hi Brandy, Its hard to find any of your recent pieces that I've not read but found one here. This has such lovely imagery and touches of loving curves. Happy New year, blessings and love, Gordon
Nicole Avatar
December 30, 2022 at 7:20 PM
I'm smiling at you, Gordon. It has been a while since I've posted a poem. I'm sure in the new year, my muse will caress the page many times. Thank you for your lovely comment. Your thoughts wrap softly around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, in the New Year. :) Hugs and love, Brandy
Pettit Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 6:40 PM
When I approach these curves, I will have to slow down before going off the cliff. This is a lovely write!
Nicole Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 9:55 AM
When caressing curves such as these, one should take their time. Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you, Robert. :) Brandy
Ellis Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Careful you are gonna need a fan club. Once again beautiful words from a steady pen. Natural and never forced. So impressive.
Nicole Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:53 PM
Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you, Michael. I am always writing from the heart. Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. :) Brandy
Tacito Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 9:56 PM
Hi! So, this is my 1st time reading your work & I'm happy to have come across this. Their is a slow, fiery intensity both within & in between the lines. Powerful emotion & depth, Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 8:50 PM
So kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. This is filled with beauty, love and tenderness. There is passion within. Thank you, Poet. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Lindley Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 1:39 PM
A very fine offering of beauty, love and sensual delights. Imagery and romanticisms evoking thoughts of a youthful past and midnight trysts that were treasures one never ever forgets. A fav- a romantic gem too. God bless..
Nicole Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 8:35 PM
Thank you, Robert. Love is a whisper along the wind, and these words capture delicate moments of the heart- with a hint of sensuality. I appreciate you and your kind thoughts. Thank you for adding this to your favorites as well. I am smiling. My best to you. :) Brandy
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February 18, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Heya Brandy, you have a very delightful delicate touch to your poetry, an essence of lightness, yet teeming with depth, an almost ephemeral quality, like it’s written on a breeze, certainly more than little scribbles, sensuous indeed, cheers David
Nicole Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Oh my ! Thank you, David. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. Like a whisper, words drift along the page and moments unfold. There is a touch of sensuality within. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. :) Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 4:51 PM
Nice sensuous write!
Nicole Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Thank you, Kim. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Downing  Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 6:17 AM
You sure have a way of teasing romance. What a beautiful enchanting short story of your thoughts from heart. :)
Nicole Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Oh my !! Thank you, Akkina. Such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry. My heart is in every word. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 4:50 AM
Brandy, I find this scribble soft and romantic, with a hint of sensuality even. Keep making these new memories with your words my sweet friend. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 12:43 PM
Thank you, John. I am smiling and blushing, all at the same time. As long as words caress me, there will be sweet moments and memories made. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Delightfully tender and manifestly romantic as the kiss of magenta sunset, Brandy. I always enjoy your teasing words--like the awesome ending lines:---A new memory is made, between your heart and mine.
Nicole Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Words are meant to caress all the senses. I am happy that you enjoyed this little scribble of mine. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy
Mcintosh Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 5:47 AM
Beautiful as a caress that whispers across the spirit... lovely and tender - I love this. God bless you dear lady
Nicole Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 5:41 PM
So sweet of you to say. Thank you, Regina. I like this line- "a caress that whispers across the spirit" It should be in a poem somewhere. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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