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I am not sure, do i make you responsible for the things i do the ones i do not want to do do i make you responsible for the things i do not and i want to do in theory in theory what to do that makes your life more sensfull and what not to do that avoids the world to fall apart is also my responsibility and knowing and not doing breaks me apart apart we are at the same time the things we are doing together – but the minds try to flee I hopelessly try to find sense fulill the time and you are trying to flee your mind mind was never something worth believing for you thats the one and only life to come through time passes by so why why is the question turning in my head and mind that mind that feels rather than think what is best to do but i can not live it with you and still i am here seeing your answer to time to life is dazing your mind that cant answer my question i do not want to follow nor go away

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Date: 6/4/2017 2:53:00 PM
I like it how you start each new stanza with the last words of the previous stanza. That question goes round and round in your mind. And the answer is so elusive... Welcome to PoetrySoup
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