In the Woods

Walking happily alone in the woods,
Moving on a narrow path walk as I go along,
I saw a blinding light that change my mood,
Curious am I to know what it is and go on.

Looking behind makes my hair stands,
I saw a blurred moving creature in human form,
It feels like my feet frozen and I can’t move on,
Is this real? Or it’s just only my imagination?

The sounds of howling fill in the air,
A lovely view in the woods turned like a twilight zone,
My mind tells me to run…is it only a bear?
Anyway, what on earth am I doing in the woods alone?

All I want is to be with our nature,
Just to breath the fresh air that is so pure,
To embrace the blessings of our creator,
But it turns out to be in horror.

At last I reach my main destination,
That blinding light I saw is paradise in perfection,
All around me are the tall trees with colorful flowers,
Rays of the sunlight peek on the leaves from atop.

My heart is in peace right now,
All I have to say is a big “WOW”,
A miracle sent from heaven as I gaze,
In the silence of the day I find solace.




September 10, 2013
1:30 a.m.
8th Place Winner
For Caleb Smith's "Into The Woods" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/6/2013 1:01:00 AM
Hey Big congrats to you. I really liked this woods contest.
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Date: 10/5/2013 11:04:00 AM
Well penned! Yeah she deserves itcos to me she is the most amiable damsel. Thanks for your words of encouragement. The best!
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Date: 10/1/2013 8:50:00 PM
lovely win Maria............. LUV.............. SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 7:22:00 PM
finely penned write...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:16:00 PM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Maria. - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:08:00 PM
a lovely win Maria, ...Linda
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Date: 9/28/2013 5:49:00 AM
I like this, well penned Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/15/2013 11:43:00 PM
Loved it Maria. After all nature poems is my ideal delight.
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:34:00 AM
This is another excellent write of yours my dearest friend Maria. Next time that you'll go to the wood can you invite me to go with you please? ;))) I extremely love and so enjoyed your outstanding poem this p.m. Two thumbs up here! I'm so glad to read more new poems from you. Have a blessed wkend! love much & biggest sweet hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/12/2013 12:12:00 AM
It sounds like the woods is spiritually great for you. ME LIKES
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Date: 9/11/2013 4:54:00 PM
wonderful write Maria....best wishes
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Date: 9/9/2013 11:41:00 PM
Hi, my dearest friend Maria. A very beautiful poem I really enjoyed today. I love it so much. An enlightening poem with a very wonderful ending. Thank you so much for sharing and for your precious time reading my poem. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/9/2013 1:18:00 PM
- Dear Maria .... never go alone in the woods ..... An interesting poem for contest, good luck! - (Next time I'll be with you .... lol) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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