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In the Woods

I set off along the faint trail it was one I had not noticed before plunging me deep into unknown territory stomach clenched in excitement as I strode on Tall old Oaks, Aspens, Chestnuts and Beeches cloaked the way ahead, I was aware of silence rather a nervous paused silent as if holding it's breath everything seemed to be waiting for something to happen Deeper into the woods I went, admiring the new slightly odd flora and fauna scattered about, beautiful flowers blooming mushrooms two feet and more wide with red and yellow spots sturdy enough to sit on while I took a rest Slipping into sleep I traveled even deeper until I came to the heart of these mysterious woods a shout went up from elves, fairies and pixies she is here at last, our soon to be crowned new queen A magical glen with a throne in the middle red carpet made from red flower petals strewn jewels most wondrous glinting in the trees birds so colorful that they dazzle as they fly Clasping me by the hand the pixies lead to the throne once I am seated, they serve me with golden nectar tasty berries and cakes of flowers on leaves for plates full of such excitement I gaze around the clearing A place of tranquility and majestical splendor little houses in the trees and small fairy lights standing sentinel was an ancient gnarled Oak branches waving as it moved towards me Shaking as it drew closer and stopped before me an elf handed it a crown that glittered with gems turning to me it said let the crowning commence with great ceremony he uttered the words "Has any here just cause as to why she shouldn't be crowned?" A deathly silence prevailed not even a murmur Then turning to me he placed it on my head all around were now on bended knee, heads bowed The oak said "Now you are our ordained queen" As a great cheer went up I startled back awake the clearing, throne and all the little people vanished All that was left behind was a feather of wonderful hues and the crashing of a startled stag fleeing into the trees written 09/07/2013 contest In The Woods

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Date: 10/1/2013 8:45:00 PM
lovely win............. LUV.............. SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 7:15:00 PM
Loved your poem Shadow....congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2013 2:54:00 PM
that was cool how you closed with the crashing of the stag through the trees. you were in the woods dreaming of the woods. A very nice fantasy type poem. BIG congrats.
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Date: 10/1/2013 4:14:00 PM
Ty Andrea was fun to write lol Shadow x smile
Date: 9/30/2013 7:47:00 PM
such a beautiful write...congrats on your win shadow :)
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Date: 10/1/2013 4:15:00 PM
Ty so much Sandra most appreciated Shadow x smile
Date: 9/30/2013 12:27:00 PM
Lovely win Shadow, ....Linda
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Date: 10/1/2013 4:16:00 PM
TY Linda enjoyed your entry in team work Shadow x smile
Date: 9/30/2013 11:55:00 AM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Shadow - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2013 4:17:00 PM
Ty Anne Lise glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smile
Date: 9/8/2013 2:42:00 PM
Love it,, this is my kind of read,, all the magic ;}
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Date: 9/8/2013 3:16:00 PM
I did let my imagination rip a little lol Debbie ty for kind review Shadow x smile
Date: 9/8/2013 2:11:00 PM
Hi Linda, Nice creative work from you..Good luck.. Ken
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Date: 9/8/2013 2:36:00 PM
Ty ken much appreciated Shadow x smile
Date: 9/8/2013 11:55:00 AM
Delightful, my dear...I came to know it was a lovely dream when you said you could sit on a mushroom! :) Lovely entry. Good luck on the contest! Hugs!
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Date: 9/8/2013 2:35:00 PM
hi Eileen we have puffball mushrooms over which can be as much as 3 feet long (1 meter) a child or young teenager could sit on one if placed in the center. Ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 9/8/2013 7:20:00 AM
This is really beautiful. It has humor and description. The parallel to a wedding ceremony is so cute. This was a lot of fun to read. You must be a lot of fun to be with.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/8/2013 2:32:00 PM
hi Duke I am just me lol. Ty I really appreciate your review Shadow x smile
Date: 9/8/2013 6:53:00 AM
Wow Shadow an extrordinary piece. I was thinking this was the poem for Isaiah's contest. Either way I am so pleased I read it.
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Date: 9/8/2013 2:16:00 PM
no not for Isaiah lol Richard. so happy you liked it Ty Shadow x smile
Date: 9/7/2013 3:25:00 PM
- A unique story of your Woods, beautiful poem Shadow! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2013 4:13:00 AM
Ty Anne will be interesting to see where others take this. gl yourself Shadow x smile
Date: 9/7/2013 11:43:00 AM
Simply beautiful creativity. Your imagination is the source of great imagery and great pleasure was experienced in reading this poem. Your talent will live on in your writing..... Love ya dearly.... Jake
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Date: 9/8/2013 4:15:00 AM
Jake your wonderful review has blown me away Ty for being so inspiring I will Soup Mail you (if that's ok) Shadow x smile

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