In the Womb's Flow

Sunset waters ebb and flow,
in shades of silver, gold and blue;
megaliths arise, greet periwinkle skies
while warm sands, traveling waves embrace.

Eyes cast upon the horizon lines,
greet gulls in heaven's play;
a cavern frames old Sol's facade,
as curlicue waves knit watery lace.




1-23-2023
BRIAN STRAND CONTEST NO 1178 Poetry Contest
Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Dear M. L., your golden pen expresses the beauty of Nature in exquisite style. Simply superb! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kiser Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:41 AM
Many thanks.
Kauffman Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Such a wonderful picture of serenity at twilight on the beach ML! Love your "curlicue waves" as they "knit watery lace!" What an innovative image! Congratulations on your win!
Kiser Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Many thanks Sam and I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.
Fowler Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Ahh...very nice ML. Congratulations on your win! :)
Kiser Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 10:59 AM
A creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day writing away.........
Kiser Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 12:36 PM
Thanks Paula and you have a great weekend.
Romios Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 3:37 PM
Wow, such imagery….gets my mind going, Beautiful vocabulary , ML Panagiota
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 3:48 PM
Oh good, thanks.
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