In the Wizard's Garden

The damsel with the angelic face
Always wondered what lay beyond  the garden wall
Until one day she could not  resist at all
And went inside those forbidden walls to see this secret place

Down three steps she made her way
In a dress of tangerine that stood out 'neath skies of gray
She walked down the path and wandered near the small canal
Unaware that she would soon kindle the wrath
Of he who tended  the garden beyond the  stone  wall's path

She did not see the wizard as he stood under the archway
Attired all in black from head to toe
Blending in with the bleakness of the day
Ready to cast his spell upon beauty's brow
Or ravage the  lovely  flower he desired so

In the garden of the wizard 
She was the one and only rose
As his ghostly silhouette seemed to guard
The most precious flower his garden shows


For Isaiah's - George Dunlop Leslie - contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 1:15 PM
This was really well written, for me I would have enjoyed if you developed the story more, this could be an epic write. Congratulations on your win!
A  Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 1:03 PM
interesting one must say! Congrats ~SKAT~
Roberts Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 2:47 AM
congrats Joseph ....Seren
Delaney Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 6:26 PM
Awesome description ....congratulations, Joseph On your First Place win......
Sharma Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 2:46 AM
Really a very interesting and enjoyable poem.
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 4:24 PM
This is amazing., enjoyed reading your winning Poe, warm Smiles, Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 12:08 AM
Congratulations Joseph well done seeing you a lot in the winning circle recently, its terrific xx
May Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 6:15 AM
thank you Mandy
Roberts Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 11:34 PM
Joseph this is first class ... Seren
May Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 6:16 AM
thank you Seren
Zerbst Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 9:03 PM
I am quite taken with the secrecy and slight suspense or mystery about this piece. It does a superb job of bringing the characters and even the landscape of this particular painting to life, and that is what I was looking for. Congratulations on your first place award!
May Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 6:15 AM
thank you for my first place finish in your contest Isaiah...
Hamilton Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 5:54 PM
truly beautiful love it gl in contest Shadow x
Oyewole Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 12:44 AM
Good luck in the contest. Beautiful. AO
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 2:11 AM
- Pleased to read your beautiful poem, Joseph. - Have a superb weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 10:11 AM
thank you Anne
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 12:04 AM
joseph, this is one of the pictures I considered writing about and in doing research about the picture, I learned somewhat its meaning. You came close to what I read!! It's a very symbolic picture from what I learned. Good job.
May Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 10:14 AM
Thank you Andrea...I could not find much on it's symbolic meaning.... can you go into detail via sm....thanks
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