Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

In the Wee Hours

in the wee hours
of the morning
i love to watch the sun
stretch its arms lazily
as it thinks about
rising ever so slowly

and the october leaves
so sparse are fluttering
in anticipation
of warm rays
caressing their dorsal fins
and underbelly



AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on October 25, 2018 for contest END OCTOBER 2018 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Warren Doll November 2, 2018 at 1:53 PM Congratulations on your win, Line. Best wishes~ Warren Line Gauthier November 2, 2018 at 3:20 PM Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, Warren.

Timothy Mcguire October 28, 2018 at 7:48 PM Wonderful win cor a wonderful poem! Line Gauthier October 28, 2018 at 10:26 PM Thanks you for your lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.

Vijay Pandit October 27, 2018 at 1:26 PM Congrats on your TOP win, Line--beautiful poem. Line Gauthier October 27, 2018 at 2:17 PM Thank you so much, Vijay. Much appreciated.

Greg Gaul October 27, 2018 at 7:32 AM Yes, the wee hours. We all have them or should. We're it that we too could spend them so thoughtfully aware. We'll done. Line Gauthier October 27, 2018 at 10:46 AM Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Greg.

Andrea Dietrich October 20, 2018 at 11:38 PM this is gorgeous metaphor, Line. Sorry I have not had time to see many poems lately! Line Gauthier October 21, 2018 at 5:13 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.

Gordon Mcconnell October 20, 2018 at 4:31 PM Fine write Line,this has great imagery and must be great to waken up to sun in mornings. Blessings,Gordon Line Gauthier October 20, 2018 at 8:10 PM Thanks, Gordon, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Mystic Rose Rose October 20, 2018 at 3:36 PM You put me in a good head space from here to there. thanks for the lovely poem Line Line Gauthier October 20, 2018 at 8:10 PM Thanks for your lovely visit, Pixie.

M. L. Kiser October 20, 2018 at 2:18 PM I love the ending of this; I can almost see the scene. Beautifully penned. Line Gauthier October 20, 2018 at 8:11 PM Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, ML.

Arturo Michael October 20, 2018 at 1:41 PM In the wee hours...Like my friend Tom...I'm a morning lover....I like to feel the gentle touch of sunshine too...All the best Line Line Gauthier October 20, 2018 at 8:11 PM Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Arturo.

Tom Cunningham October 20, 2018 at 1:11 PM My favourite time of day just before sunrise any season. Tom. Line Gauthier October 20, 2018 at 1:17 PM For sure. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.