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In the Wee Hours

in the wee hours of the morning i love to watch the sun stretch its arms lazily as it thinks about rising ever so slowly and the october leaves so sparse are fluttering in breathless anticipation for a few warm rays to caress their dorsal fins and underbelly AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on October 25, 2018 for contest END OCTOBER 2018 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on October 20, 2018

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Date: 11/2/2018 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line. Best wishes~ Warren
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Date: 11/2/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, Warren.
Date: 10/28/2018 7:48:00 PM
Wonderful win cor a wonderful poem!
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Date: 10/28/2018 10:26:00 PM
Thanks you for your lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.
Date: 10/27/2018 1:26:00 PM
Congrats on your TOP win, Line--beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/27/2018 2:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/27/2018 7:32:00 AM
Yes, the wee hours. We all have them or should. We're it that we too could spend them so thoughtfully aware. We'll done.
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Date: 10/27/2018 10:46:00 AM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Greg.
Date: 10/20/2018 11:38:00 PM
this is gorgeous metaphor, Line. Sorry I have not had time to see many poems lately!
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Date: 10/21/2018 5:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.
Date: 10/20/2018 4:31:00 PM
Fine write Line,this has great imagery and must be great to waken up to sun in mornings. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 10/20/2018 8:10:00 PM
Thanks, Gordon, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/20/2018 3:36:00 PM
You put me in a good head space from here to there. thanks for the lovely poem Line
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Date: 10/20/2018 8:10:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit, Pixie.
Date: 10/20/2018 2:18:00 PM
I love the ending of this; I can almost see the scene. Beautifully penned.
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Date: 10/20/2018 8:11:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, ML.
Date: 10/20/2018 1:41:00 PM
In the wee hours...Like my friend Tom...I'm a morning lover....I like to feel the gentle touch of sunshine too...All the best Line
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Date: 10/20/2018 8:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Arturo.
Date: 10/20/2018 1:11:00 PM
My favourite time of day just before sunrise any season. Tom.
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Date: 10/20/2018 1:17:00 PM
For sure. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.

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