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In the Water

sunlight dances in the lake with the fishes - the jealous snake hisses Monoku 3: fire, earth, water and air Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/16/2018 2:33:00 PM

Deep...water, imagery an evocative combination. Nasty jealous snake. Let Sunlight dance in the lake with the fishes.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/16/2018 10:37:00 PM

Exactly, so nicely said ... thank you ...

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/4/2018 10:38:00 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Probir - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/5/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Greg ... Happy New year ...

Eve Roper

Date: 1/3/2018 12:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Probir, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/5/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thanks, Eve ...

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 9:37:00 AM

Beautiful scene. Well done, Probir. Congrats on your win.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/2/2018 11:53:00 PM

Thank you, Line, for liking the poem ...

Judith S

Date: 1/1/2018 5:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your 2nd place win Probir! So well done!!! Best, Judy

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/2/2018 5:53:00 AM

Thank you Judith ...

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/1/2018 5:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest, my Dear.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/2/2018 5:53:00 AM

Thank you, Rhoda ...

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/1/2018 4:27:00 PM

Such a lovely write. Returning with warm congratulations for your well deserved win, Probir.. ~Susan

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/2/2018 5:56:00 AM

Aaah ... Thank you,Susan ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2018 3:50:00 PM

I remember this one well. Congrats on a fine win, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/2/2018 5:57:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2018 12:44:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/2/2018 5:59:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine ...

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 12:14:00 PM

Great one liner Probir...Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/2/2018 5:58:00 AM

Thank you so much, Silent, for liking my one liner ...

Eve Roper

Date: 12/31/2017 7:17:00 PM

Wonderful monoku, Probir :) Hugs Eve ~`* and happy new year and stay safe

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/31/2017 8:51:00 PM

Thank you, Eve ...Love and Happy New year ...

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/30/2017 7:27:00 PM

The essence of your poem is captured with your dazzling imagery. I linger with your words.. enchanted. ~Susan

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/30/2017 11:22:00 PM

Thank you, Susan ... Beside your ' Silhouette', this is insignificant ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2017 5:33:00 PM

I really like this one. The snake jealous of the water. Very cool idea, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/30/2017 11:23:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea ... Your earth has been excellent ...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/30/2017 1:48:00 PM

Astute observation--well written, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/30/2017 11:25:00 PM

Thanks, Vijay ... Your new year is indeed interesting ...