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In the Water

 sunlight dances in the lake with the fishes - the jealous snake hisses


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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

January 16, 2018 at 2:33 PM

Deep...water, imagery an evocative combination. Nasty jealous snake. Let Sunlight dance in the lake with the fishes.

Probir Gupta

January 16, 2018 at 10:37 PM

Exactly, so nicely said ... thank you ...

Gregory Richard Barden

January 4, 2018 at 10:38 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Probir - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)

Probir Gupta

January 5, 2018 at 8:24 AM

Thank you, Greg ... Happy New year ...

Eve Roper

January 3, 2018 at 12:31 AM

Congratulations on your win, Probir, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*

Probir Gupta

January 5, 2018 at 8:24 AM

Thanks, Eve ...

Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 9:37 AM

Beautiful scene. Well done, Probir. Congrats on your win.

Probir Gupta

January 2, 2018 at 11:53 PM

Thank you, Line, for liking the poem ...

Judith S

January 1, 2018 at 5:20 PM

Congratulations on your 2nd place win Probir! So well done!!! Best, Judy

Probir Gupta

January 2, 2018 at 5:53 AM

Thank you Judith ...

Rhoda Tripp

January 1, 2018 at 5:02 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest, my Dear.

Probir Gupta

January 2, 2018 at 5:53 AM

Thank you, Rhoda ...

Susan Ashley

January 1, 2018 at 4:27 PM

Such a lovely write. Returning with warm congratulations for your well deserved win, Probir.. ~Susan

Probir Gupta

January 2, 2018 at 5:56 AM

Aaah ... Thank you,Susan ...

Andrea Dietrich

January 1, 2018 at 3:50 PM

I remember this one well. Congrats on a fine win, Probir.

Probir Gupta

January 2, 2018 at 5:57 AM

Thank you, Andrea ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 1, 2018 at 12:44 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

January 2, 2018 at 5:59 AM

Thank you, Sunshine ...

Silent One

January 1, 2018 at 12:14 PM

Great one liner Probir...Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Probir Gupta

January 2, 2018 at 5:58 AM

Thank you so much, Silent, for liking my one liner ...

Eve Roper

December 31, 2017 at 7:17 PM

Wonderful monoku, Probir :) Hugs Eve ~`* and happy new year and stay safe

Probir Gupta

December 31, 2017 at 8:51 PM

Thank you, Eve ...Love and Happy New year ...

Susan Ashley

December 30, 2017 at 7:27 PM

The essence of your poem is captured with your dazzling imagery. I linger with your words.. enchanted. ~Susan

Probir Gupta

December 30, 2017 at 11:22 PM

Thank you, Susan ... Beside your ' Silhouette', this is insignificant ...

Andrea Dietrich

December 30, 2017 at 5:33 PM

I really like this one. The snake jealous of the water. Very cool idea, Probir.

Probir Gupta

December 30, 2017 at 11:23 PM

Thank you, Andrea ... Your earth has been excellent ...

Vijay Pandit

December 30, 2017 at 1:48 PM

Astute observation--well written, Probir.

Probir Gupta

December 30, 2017 at 11:25 PM

Thanks, Vijay ... Your new year is indeed interesting ...

In the Water

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