In the Tub

She sinks into wetness,
releasing a long sigh,
becomes suffused 
with  the heat
seeping into her bones.

With eyes closed,
she's drifting -
the world outside,
with all it’s turmoil,
slowly fading.

The spider moves 
along the rim,
black legs in motion.

Sensing a presence,
her eyes spring open.
A scream rends the silence.

A hasty exit -
water churning,
bathtub abandoned,
wet footprints leading out.

The spider crawls on,
oblivious.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bauer Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 5:49 PM
ha! i can picture it all perfectly! great poem...
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 6:33 AM
Thanks for reading, Ilene. I'm in a poetry group where we respond to challenges. The challenge was simply, "In the Tub." It was amazing how different all those poems were.
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