In the Sun

There you are in the Sun
Shining as bright as the morning Sun
There you were standing in the glory rays of amazing Sun
You hold your arms out and stretch them towards me and I run to you with my cares and issues
Your eyes tells the story of my entire life and my loneliness of past, hurt and guilt
Your sweet smile speaks joy and peace in my world of shadows
Your eyes pierced my soul of brokenness and began to breathe into my eyes oxygen to see clearly into your vision for us to have and to hold
You let me into your heart and there we were standing there hand in hand
In love and staring at the Sun
Full of God's presence at last finally we both look  towards heaven and say in unison that we have won

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/29/2018 2:49:00 PM
Zarion, this is a lovely poem. LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2018 8:17:00 AM
Glad I was able to stop by and read this. :) "With God, How can we lose?!"...INK-U-SCRIPT
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Zarion Lovelace
Date: 1/29/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and your comment.
Date: 1/28/2018 5:27:00 PM
No way you can lose...A bright poem...In God we've won...All the best Zarion
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Zarion Lovelace
Date: 1/29/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, this is the feeling I would like to have again after my divorce is final.
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