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In the Stars

Beautiful stars twinkle in the clear, midnight sky. As the stars align in the hemisphere, the twinkling begins to magnify! The stars emerge, row upon row, diagonally and horizontally. As light begins to surge, words begin to glow, and names are spelled out above me. The names seem to be engulfed in flames for the whole world to see. Although the phenomenon is unnatural, clearly the words spell: "Jimmy and Audrey!" Wrote for my dearest friend XOXO

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/28/2011 12:13:00 PM
awwwwwwwwww<3
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Date: 2/27/2011 6:40:00 AM
very nice...love,Deb
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:41:00 AM
Awwwh! Very nice one, JAM. I'm sending a reply to your let. soon. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/25/2011 8:54:00 AM
A very sweet write for both you and Audrey. Good one.
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