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Ghazal
A form consisting of couplets, which share a rhyme and a refrain. The couplets have lines of 10 syllables (Including the refrain). The refrain can be a word or a phrase. There is internal rhyming in lines 1 and 2 and line 2 of each couplet with the refrain. Each couplet should be able to stand alone. There is no limit to the number of couplets in a Ghazal; however, a minimum of five stanzas is required.

Snowdrops always sprout early every spring, while Tulips pop up later every spring. And the naked trees don a beard of green, as trillions of buds unfurl every spring. Sweet sap starts rising in sugar maples, filling buckets drip by drip every spring. And migrating geese announce their return, their honks blaring from the skies every spring. As returning songbirds start flying home, dandelions pave their route every spring. And Japanese cherry blossoms bloom pink, as creeks run with smelts and trout every spring. While the Robin-red-breast builds its mud nests, bears emerge looking less stout every spring. Butterflies and bees arrive on the scene, and the children laugh and shout every spring.

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Date: 3/14/2022 3:42:00 AM
I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2022 8:10:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/4/2022 1:11:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my Give Me A New Poem Contest with your beautiful poem and I love your image too ~Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/4/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate your comments and the placement, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/2/2022 12:05:00 AM
Just wonderful.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2022 8:40:00 AM
Thanks, Terry, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/1/2022 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Emile, on your top win with this marvellous ghazal. You are the master of all poetic forms! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2022 8:42:00 AM
Thanks, Mala, I appreciate your flattering and encouraging comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/27/2022 1:53:00 PM
Superb, Emile. Perfect theme for the form. You are such an expert at this. I have learned so much from you. I have finished "Fragments." So, I've read through everything in all five books. I'm pretty saturated with Emile!!! I need to write you a soup mail for all the questions I have.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 2/28/2022 1:58:00 PM
Oh, Emile, I could hardly put them down once I got started. I am absolutely amazed at your natural gift for writing poetry, and your use of the different forms and formats is absolutely astonishing! Thank you! Thank you!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/28/2022 6:44:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, you read through them so quickly, I am both surprised and flattered, my friend, Emile.

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