In the Shop Window

she paused to dream again
there it was still in the shop window
sublime and stunning

the most perfect and exquisite
the whitest of wedding gowns
ruffles of grace and royalty

yards of elegance and pride
shiny beads dainty pearls
and such ornate lace

the loveliest gown of gowns
and she with heavy heart
on the outside

in the cold bitter air
resigned to her turn
of lackluster fate



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 10:48 PM
O, Line! You've really hit a home run here! I'm absolutely heart-broken for this poor bride. I can just imagine the pain. Bravo!! :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon. A most appreciated visit and comment.
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