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In the Shadows

Walking in the shadows one day, I found a house decaying, They said, "Don't go in, stay away, It's where the ghosts are staying"; I shrugged it off and went inside, With ferns the porch was covered, It seemed like someone did reside, Some fruit bits I discovered; Gingerly, I pushed the cracked door, It opened with a great whine, A staircase led to the first floor, Which was overgrown with vine; The ceiling had an etched rosette, The roof reached up to the sky, 'Twas dark and dingy, made me sweat, I unlatched a window nigh; I saw a big garden out there, Once lovely, now untended, Suddenly I felt in the air Whispers uncomprehended; "Welcome home ", someone loudly said, I rushed down to the entrance, And there I saw a parrot red, The much-feared ghostly presence. 07.15.2020 Rhyme scheme: abab Contest: Decaying house Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 7/27/2020 5:00:00 AM
This is really beautiful. I loved how you made the end unexpected and beautiful Jo. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 7/25/2020 9:38:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my decaying house poem with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 7/19/2020 4:03:00 PM
I especially loved the ghostly parrot idea Jo! many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2020 11:13:00 PM
Nicely composed Daniel. All the best. Up till I have not tried.
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Date: 7/16/2020 5:10:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/16/2020 5:46:00 AM
Your thoughts would've been my own. Nice rhyming, Jo.
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Date: 7/15/2020 2:07:00 PM
Nicely done! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/15/2020 7:46:00 AM
Very nicely penned Jo, I like the "ghostly" parrot at the end, best wishes..
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Date: 7/15/2020 7:16:00 AM
Your story well told, Jo--I especially liked the turn towards the end.
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