In the Shadows

Walking in the shadows one day,
   I found a house decaying,
     They said, "Don't go in, stay away,
       It's where the ghosts are staying";

       I shrugged it off and went inside,
     With ferns the porch was covered,
    It seemed like someone did reside,
 Some fruit bits I discovered;

 Gingerly, I pushed the cracked door,
   It opened with a great whine,
     A staircase led to the first floor,
       Which was overgrown with vine;

       The ceiling had an etched rosette,
     The roof reached up to the sky,
   'Twas dark and dingy, made me sweat,
 I unlatched a window nigh;

 I saw a big garden out there,
   Once lovely, now untended, 
     Suddenly I felt in the air
        Whispers uncomprehended;

        "Welcome home ", someone loudly said,
      I rushed down to the entrance,
   And there I saw a parrot red,
 The much-feared ghostly presence.




07.15.2020
Rhyme scheme: abab

Contest: Decaying house 
Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 5:00 AM
This is really beautiful. I loved how you made the end unexpected and beautiful Jo. Congratulations on your win. :)
La France Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 9:38 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my decaying house poem with this wonderful write _Constance
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 4:03 PM
I especially loved the ghostly parrot idea Jo! many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 11:13 PM
Nicely composed Daniel. All the best. Up till I have not tried.
Salehi Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 5:10 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
Logan Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Your thoughts would've been my own. Nice rhyming, Jo.
Leffanta Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 2:07 PM
Nicely done! Aloha! Rico
May Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Very nicely penned Jo, I like the "ghostly" parrot at the end, best wishes..
Pandit Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 7:16 AM
Your story well told, Jo--I especially liked the turn towards the end.
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