In the Shadowland

In The Shadowland

In the Shadowland , where heartache and sorrow reign supreme,
 "darkness of pain" marches in ever gloomy fields
 with misery galloping and splashing in widely tragic streams
 blues stirring the worries to ever increase their yields!

Sadness sings it's stampeding herd of very desperate woes,
 "pangs of loss" dancing in the dark forests so very deep 
 stomping with glee all yet "untouched" fingers and toes
 where  solace, healing and recovery so soundly sleeps!

In the Shadowland, where loneliness and desperation screams,
 "evils of hate" invade and torment a ill-hurting mind
 shady little dark spirits cut away restful little dreams
 tiny blades slicing up everything so peaceful and kind!

Robert Lindley, 05-28-2014


This is a rewrite from a poem I wrote back in the 80's.
A bit shorter as rewritten and not an exact replication but
 my memory at 60 lags a tad. This was the results from having 
gone through a brutal divorce.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/24/2014 9:06:00 PM
Hello Robert, how are you today:) Linda
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/24/2014 9:08:00 PM
Just fine my friend. Pen has been busy tonight. three in a row, my muse works me overtime..lol
Date: 6/17/2014 7:30:00 AM
Well penned Robert...congrats on the win
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/24/2014 6:59:00 PM
Thanks much Joseph!!!
Date: 6/17/2014 2:40:00 AM
Lovely win Robert....Love ~SKAT
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/24/2014 6:58:00 PM
Thanks my friend!!
Date: 6/17/2014 2:08:00 AM
Robert.... Congratulations:) Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest... Stop by and enjoy my newest poem "Mr President" OR my fresh blog "NOT ENOUGH" if you want or have time. :):):) Hugs & Love ~~ LINDA ~~
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/24/2014 6:58:00 PM
Thank you my friend!!
Date: 5/28/2014 2:50:00 PM
extremely powerful well written poem Robert ty for visiting my page hugs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/28/2014 4:16:00 PM
Your page is a delight to visit my friend! Many thanks on your replying to my writes!!
Date: 5/28/2014 1:55:00 PM
Great expression, Robert --- these types of works are hard to write --- great effort! Always, Keith
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/28/2014 4:14:00 PM
Thank you Keith. I found the need to self contain the message into a short offering and still attempt to impress the intensity of the results of a tragic life action that almost destroyed me!!
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