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In the Sacred River

In the sacred river. I was born into polytheism, Where Yemoja was the deity; The goddess of river was the anchor That held the village to life. Her shrine was the sacred river Where fortune was sought and recieved; There fishing was forbade Goddess’ heiresses could not be food. The heiresses were beautiful Appealing to eye,appealing to mouth, But the beauty and taste of goddess Were certainly beyond man’s hunt. In their beauty they were sluggish Their reverance made them so, When you were Yemoja’s heiress Who again shall you fear? Then came the day of armageddon The conflict of the titans When guts of three children Vowed to taste the godess’ flesh. Two cousins and I had this agenda, At the shadow of sun,we stole us to shrine; With a basket we arrested five goddesses, In a clay pot they became food. As we were savouring the taste of the godess A bone hung in my gut,I coughed to eject; Mother came to help,cat let out of the bag: Abomination,fishing in the sacred river. Yemoja must be begged: Twelve lashes of cudgel per child, One hen,one cock ,one snail, Six yards of white swiss velvet. User’s name : Kayod5. Contest : Gone fishin’. Sponsor : Caleb Smith.

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Date: 4/30/2014 7:03:00 PM
deeper than the ocean this is, kayods.. how are you?.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 4/30/2014 5:45:00 AM
Very brilliant and enjoyable write on fishing. Congrats on the win, Kayod5
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Date: 4/29/2014 5:04:00 PM
Kayod5. Congratulations, in Caleb's "Gone Fishin'" contest.. always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/26/2014 12:35:00 AM
I'm currently not very knowledgeable about Eastern philosophy. I've just started to scratch the surface of this fascinating area. This looks like a contending write to me. Good work.
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Date: 2/26/2014 3:34:00 AM
Thank you Robert for the reading and the delightful comment.Have a good time.
Date: 2/24/2014 4:42:00 PM
very profound Kayod5 great pen hugs
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Date: 2/25/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Shadow,your comment is delightful.
Date: 2/24/2014 8:31:00 AM
wow, this is quite the fish tale!! Just joking around with that phrase. Seriously, I never heard of a culture forbidden to eat fish. Is this only a myth? I really like your different kind of take on this poetry theme!! btw, what country do you live in? Tell me on a comment to my poems. I don't read replies on my own comments usually and I really want to know where you are from.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/24/2014 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Andrea ,in your next jewel I will certainly do the needful.One love.
Date: 2/24/2014 5:35:00 AM
ahha, you got caught and how superb the storytelling of this one, kayods.. i like the mythical references and the adventurous fling of this unique write.. what a polished write!.. huggs
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/24/2014 1:00:00 PM
Yah Nette , Yemoja refused to be cheated so we got caught. Many thanks for your every time support.One love Nette.
Date: 2/24/2014 2:41:00 AM
Dear Kayode: Good work. All the best. Leon
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/24/2014 4:52:00 AM
Thank you Leon,have a great day.
Date: 2/23/2014 1:38:00 PM
Kayod5 I found this a very interesting read, good luck...David
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/23/2014 1:49:00 PM
Thank you David for the reading and the comment. Have a rewarding week ahead.

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