In the Sacred River

In the sacred river.


I was born into polytheism,
Where Yemoja was the deity;
The goddess of river was the anchor
That held the village to life.

Her shrine was the sacred river
Where fortune was sought and recieved;
There fishing was forbade
Goddess’ heiresses could not be food.

The heiresses were beautiful
Appealing to eye,appealing to mouth,
But the beauty and taste of goddess
Were certainly beyond man’s hunt.

In their beauty they were sluggish
Their reverance made them so,
When you were Yemoja’s heiress
Who again shall you fear?

Then came the day of armageddon
The conflict of the titans
When guts of three children
Vowed to  taste the godess’ flesh.

Two cousins and I had this agenda,
At the shadow of sun,we stole us to  shrine;
With a basket we arrested five goddesses,
In a clay pot they became food.

As we were savouring the taste of the godess
A bone hung in my gut,I coughed to eject;
Mother came to help,cat let out of the bag:
Abomination,fishing in the sacred river.

Yemoja must be begged:
Twelve lashes of cudgel per child,
One hen,one cock ,one snail,
Six yards of white swiss velvet.



User’s name : Kayod5.
Contest        : Gone fishin’.
Sponsor       : Caleb Smith.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:03 PM
deeper than the ocean this is, kayods.. how are you?.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
Mehta Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Very brilliant and enjoyable write on fishing. Congrats on the win, Kayod5
A   Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Kayod5. Congratulations, in Caleb's "Gone Fishin'" contest.. always~ LINDA
Pettit Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 12:35 AM
I'm currently not very knowledgeable about Eastern philosophy. I've just started to scratch the surface of this fascinating area. This looks like a contending write to me. Good work.
Kayode Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 3:34 AM
Thank you Robert for the reading and the delightful comment.Have a good time.
Hamilton Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 4:42 PM
very profound Kayod5 great pen hugs
Kayode Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Shadow,your comment is delightful.
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 8:31 AM
wow, this is quite the fish tale!! Just joking around with that phrase. Seriously, I never heard of a culture forbidden to eat fish. Is this only a myth? I really like your different kind of take on this poetry theme!! btw, what country do you live in? Tell me on a comment to my poems. I don't read replies on my own comments usually and I really want to know where you are from.
Kayode Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Andrea ,in your next jewel I will certainly do the needful.One love.
Onclaud Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 5:35 AM
ahha, you got caught and how superb the storytelling of this one, kayods.. i like the mythical references and the adventurous fling of this unique write.. what a polished write!.. huggs
Kayode Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 1:00 PM
Yah Nette , Yemoja refused to be cheated so we got caught. Many thanks for your every time support.One love Nette.
Enriquez Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 2:41 AM
Dear Kayode: Good work. All the best. Leon
Kayode Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 4:52 AM
Thank you Leon,have a great day.
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 1:38 PM
Kayod5 I found this a very interesting read, good luck...David
Kayode Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Thank you David for the reading and the comment. Have a rewarding week ahead.
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