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In the Rain Drenched Sand

I write a message in the rain drenched sand I scrawl my words with trembling fingers I appeal to him with my thoughts And he listens to my prayers He says, I am his child My whole life he has planned for me He is part of my heart and soul An exquisite shining pearl And like a fisherman gathering his net He gathers his children to him His love has no bounds He is the inspiration for my poetry A light showing the way I write a message in the rain drenched sand I scrawl my words in the wet While he holds my trembling hand _______________________________ August 27, 2012 Poetry/Verse/In the Rain Drenched Sand Copyright Protected, ID 09-415-628-27 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Inspired by the poem Premier Contest, In The Palm Of His Hand By Vienna Bombardieri, NA, Judged 09/2012 __________________ Written for the Standard Copy Cat, Sponsor, Joann Grisetti, Judged 08/27/2012 Fourth Place

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Date: 9/1/2012 10:18:00 AM
constance, congratulations in Joann's "copy cat contest" have yourself a great day.. ~LUV~PD
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Date: 8/31/2012 3:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win...Sara
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Copy Cat" contest Constance. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:24:00 PM
Gosh, this is beautiful, Constance. one of the best on this list of awesome poems! congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/27/2012 1:01:00 PM
I found this one inspirational, as was Vie's. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/24/2012 3:14:00 PM
love this beautiful spiritual write, Constance - how lovely that it was inspired by Vie's poem
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:44:00 PM
wow, what a beautiful one, Constance. Vienna is a marvelous poet here and I love how you emulated one of her poems here. You chose well on the copy cat theme!!
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Date: 8/23/2012 3:23:00 PM
Great choice for this entry..Enjoyed reading ..Speaks of your faith also..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2012 3:13:00 PM
This is a wondrously perfect write my friend! I truly loved every line of this incredible poem! I really enjoyed this write that you have so elaborately written! Thank you for sharing this piece with all of us, Great Work!!
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