Constance La France Poet Verse

In the Rain Drenched Sand

I write a message in the rain drenched sand
I scrawl my words with trembling fingers
I appeal to him with my thoughts
And he listens to my prayers

He says, I am his child
My whole life he has planned for me
He is part of my heart and soul
An exquisite shining pearl

And like a fisherman gathering his net
He gathers his children to him
His love has no bounds
He is the inspiration for my poetry

A light showing the way
I write a message in the rain drenched sand
I scrawl my words in the wet
While he holds my trembling hand

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August 27, 2012


Poetry/Verse/In the Rain Drenched Sand
Copyright Protected, ID 09-415-628-27
All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

Inspired by the poem Premier Contest, In The Palm Of His Hand
By Vienna Bombardieri, NA, Judged 09/2012

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Written for the Standard Copy Cat, 
Sponsor, Joann Grisetti, Judged 08/27/2012

Fourth Place

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Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 10:18 AM constance, congratulations in Joann's "copy cat contest" have yourself a great day.. ~LUV~PD

Sara Kendrick August 31, 2012 at 3:23 PM Congrats on your win...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2012 at 7:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Copy Cat" contest Constance. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 27, 2012 at 5:24 PM Gosh, this is beautiful, Constance. one of the best on this list of awesome poems! congrats for your win.

Joann Grisetti August 27, 2012 at 1:01 PM I found this one inspirational, as was Vie's. Congratulations.

Jack Horne August 24, 2012 at 3:14 PM love this beautiful spiritual write, Constance - how lovely that it was inspired by Vie's poem

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2012 at 10:44 PM wow, what a beautiful one, Constance. Vienna is a marvelous poet here and I love how you emulated one of her poems here. You chose well on the copy cat theme!!

Sara Kendrick August 23, 2012 at 3:23 PM Great choice for this entry..Enjoyed reading ..Speaks of your faith also..Sara

Russell Sivey August 23, 2012 at 3:13 PM This is a wondrously perfect write my friend! I truly loved every line of this incredible poem! I really enjoyed this write that you have so elaborately written! Thank you for sharing this piece with all of us, Great Work!!