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the calm here is filled with your presence i feel your energy come over me as it lingers in the air i breathe and paints a warm smile upon my face i do not feel alone it's surreal how there is hovering that's tangible between the two dimensions meanwhile this still looks much like a processing plant but feels to me more like a gateway where we said our last goodbyes and i have come to bask in this energy so no, i do not feel alone i'm remembering how i waited in this same room on this same chair then you would suddenly come around the corner such were the simple times when i was there for you and you were here for me but still i feel your kinetic energy like arms around my body and do not feel alone AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2025

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Date: 5/22/2025 7:55:00 PM
Resonates totally, eerily, hauntingly, and yet reassuringly with me, Line. Thanks for posting this one, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2025 7:57:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon ~

Book: Reflection on the Important Things