In the Nights Sky

In the nights sky, The big round moon amplifies
Nocturnally a journey set in motion, as my minds eye opens

Through the shining stars I will find a way, to reach the Milky way Hyperspace I will travel, this journey will not unravel Exosphere has been reached its a convey, to the planets walkway
Nebula's fill the empty darkness, in the distance I can see Venus Inferior she may be, but her light beautifully bright and full of love is what I see Gliding by Mars in its state of unwillingness, a red hue glows in all its wickedness Heading past the gas giant I flee, Jupiter holds his principles in a high degree To Pluto filled with icy gracefulness, the dwarf planet that impacts toughness So as I reach my apogee, the emptiness invaded by mystery was a site to see
Stratosphere is now where I will go, but I will say it was quite a show Knowing the journey must come to an end, God I must commend Youthfulness builds imagination for tomorrow, something we must never outgrow
5/2/2017
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Sands Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Wow - This is an amazing Acrostic! Very well done :)
Hamilton Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 9:25 AM
This was a very entertaining write Jeremy! You took us through the solar system, on a celestial journey. Third last line typo(quite). This is not a sonnet, a sonnet generally has 14 lines, 3 quatrains and a final couplet. Look up examples to learn this form. You could call this one a rhyme, not sonnet, but all in all a nice write!
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May 2, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Beautifully written Jeremy..
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