in the nature

Well, I must say that I did not want to walk two hours, some days I am downright tired of diabetes

So I drove to Logonna Daoulas after a visit to the Kerdrein strike for the view of Brest, days it is the most beautiful city in the world, sometimes it is a city of big idiots,

There I park on a strike, with a cd of samba (the schools of the carnival) it makes me think that the Brazilians are crazy, so there is energy in this music,

And there it is magic, a fox passes five meters from my car motionless so and disappears on the beach, my adventure is just beginning

I move and drive to the Bendy, I stop, there a doe disappears before my eyes in a field (weak light, but I note the white tuft on the rear train)

I still walk a minute, to have clearer ideas, then drive to the village of Logonna Daoulas

There I am on the same field as the other day, samba music, deep down, a doe stands straight and fixes the car, it’s very beautiful,

Engine on I remain to look at her, she is not afraid, I lasted two minutes and I cracked, do not frighten the animals, I am still four hundred meters from the village, 

I rush to the national, then decides as if by a magical intuition to make a detour through Irvillac, it’s not Chicago, friends, just a small Breton village,

and there better than the scene of fire of Atlanta in "gone with the wind", I see at about thirty meters, three deer with the tail leu leu, all three at the top of the field, in full contrast with the sky, on the horizon line, alas, I had not taken my camera, what regret (they continued their way, in single file (queue leu leu en français) on the crest of the field, really bright)
I left and a kilometer further between Irvillac and Daoulas, I see a fox jumping in a field, he was hunting visibly I stopped, he was afraid and just drove off as fast as an arrow, let’s say that all this put me in shape, I have the impression that with spring, nature takes over

Let us take care of this nature, let us no longer expand fields to infinity



Good Sunday the on earth my friends
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Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 5:30 AM
Ahh!! An exciting day in commune with God and nature. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Yann, this is very good remarkable poem. Very nice indeed. I do agree with you. I hope those big idiots that have the power and the money let the little ones that have nothing in their pockets, but intelligence enough to keep looking for their survival. Bravo Yann
Buhagiar Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 1:11 AM
You do not get diabetes by eating too much. Normally it's inherited. I have decided to go for walks too.
Buehler Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 9:15 PM
Dear Yann, I loved being able to enjoy the many sights of your adventurous trip with you. Thank you for sharing this exciting story. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 5:41 AM
A wonderful write to read this morning! Oh what would we do if the world went silent of our beautiful creatures! I remember a pretty red fox running from the back to the front of my yard. So cool how God taps into our euphoria at such sightings. Our hearts beat and joy explodes. Bless you, Yann!
Rose  Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 4:30 AM
also sending love and healing prayers for your health, love
Rose  Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 4:29 AM
Isn't it wonderful when we can experience nature up close and personal as you did dear friend. So nice to view it through your eyes dear Yann :)
George Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 4:19 AM
Nature presents variety and beauty. With spring, the the fox and deer are once again out from their coverts. I hope you had an adventurous ride, spotting wild animals. Great account, dear Yaan. Hope you will be relieved of your diabetes with timely care and proper exercise.
Rolland Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 5:16 PM
thanks valsa for the support and kindness, to relieve of diabetes is a dail task and need strong will, there are ups and downs, thanks for commenting my poem, i like walking it helps have a sweet week
Buhagiar Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 1:48 AM
I too suffer from diabetes 2, but I can never bring it down to the proper level. Driving in a car won't help though. Still your imagery is beautiful and alluring.
Rolland Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 5:14 PM
thanks Victor so much, usually i walk one hour or two a day, but i don't like repeating everyday of the year, i drunk too much sugared beverages and ate smarties a lot when i was close to retiring, it is very dangerous, i didn't know that, take care and write excellent poetry, it is more interesting thanks poet
One Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 4:29 AM
Great storytelling Yann..
Rolland Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 11:13 PM
thanks a lot So , for the supportive comment
Empress Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:58 AM
What a sincere and beautifully written write. I love the flow of your thoughts woven throughout, and thought to myself I love brazilian music too. And i can feel the struggles too with diabetes. And your ending leaves a very profound thought message to your readers, what more can we do besides be kind to nature. Pleasure reading your work
Rolland Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 11:15 PM
thanks a lot IE, I send you some brazilian samba, your words touched me , i love sharing lives of animals for a while, God bless you
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