In the Mountains

In the mountains 
There is silence 
  
         The peaceful contentment 
          Of a mind
          At one with nature 
          In the evening twilight 

Surrounded by tranquil beauty 
And the stillness of the rugged landscape 

          Let the meditative mind 
          Pause and reflect 
          In a moment of silence 

               What God has done. 


             W.A CHOLT. Copyright Fergal O Reilly.  2020


              21/4/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hinshaw Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 4:26 PM
Beautiful verse, W.A.! I can appreciate your poem very much since I live in Col Springs and I can glance up from my typing and see Glorious Pikes Peak in the distance. I'm glad you enjoyed the Fort Laramie write and appreciate your comments. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
Rigoler Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my work. I'm not mountain person, heights have adverse effects on me. I do, however, enjoy at a distance. I have driven over the Rockies and the Alps when i was much younger. I enjoy writing short succinct poems and longer ones (like historical narratives). Best to you in your writing endeavors. / Maurice
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 1:00 PM
This is a favorite for me. So nice. I live in the mountains and love the mountains. Well done :)
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 8:54 PM
Your last line says it all, and wraps your poem up pretty with a bow. Thanks, Gershon
Callus Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 4:20 AM
Yes, nature provides an excellent basis for meditation, especially when we are not subjected to the distractions of everyday life. ~ Regards // paul
Romios Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 12:53 PM
I like this because it sings sweetly of God Panagiota xx
Koplin Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Peaceful and pleasant. Thanks for the journey.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 8:55 PM
So calm and beautiful! Need this breath of fresh air!
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