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In the Mood

Neath blanket of night
Lovers burn like shooting stars
Pale moon blushes pink

For Contest Sponsored by Catie Lindsey
May 5, 2013

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Richard D Seal

Date: 5/15/2013 5:58:00 PM

You certainly have great descriptive powers my little Desert Orhid, I'll admit I'm not keen on haiku but this is the 'ace of hearts'. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 5:59:00 PM

There you are! :) Thanks, Richard. You think it has a chance? We'll have to wait and see, won't we?

Guru Jad

Date: 5/15/2013 5:05:00 PM

Absolutely fascinating.... This is a winner for sure!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 5:08:00 PM

I sure hope so, my dear! :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2013 3:17:00 PM

Quite nice mood. A romantic poem beautifully adorned with beautiful words. Thanks......,loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 3:20:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, BL. Glad you liked it.

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/15/2013 7:53:00 AM

Tremendous. What a romantic & passionate vibe! Color me impressed...and pink. :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 3:19:00 PM

HEE HEE! Love the play on words, Drake! Color me impressed! WOW! Thanks for the visit.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/15/2013 7:08:00 AM

Ooh-la-la, the flower is ready to be picked. A sensual write, Eileen. Nice one, my friend. Licia :-)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 7:25:00 AM

:) Licia...you always make me happy! Hugs to you!!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/15/2013 6:26:00 AM

You amaze me, you are a shooting star with staying power!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 7:25:00 AM

Richard...that must be the nicest thing you've ever said to me! :) I'm glowing!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/15/2013 5:21:00 AM

Fantastic poetic images! Yes, lovers burn like that!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 5:23:00 AM

Yes, they do...don't they? :) Thanks, my dear poet! A visit from you is always welcome!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/14/2013 11:54:00 PM

The blushing moon... what an original expression! I say, I like it a lot. "In the mood" indeed. Best of luck to you! Nice to see you do haiku now and then... a rare treat :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 5:24:00 AM

I'm shying away from this form as I know I never get it up to the standards required, but...my simple brain can't get everything right, and there is no harm in taking poetic license, is there? Thanks for the encouragement, my dear! :) Hugs!

Deb Wilson

Date: 5/14/2013 10:23:00 PM

very passionate poem you have written here..I really liked it a lot...love,Deb

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 5:22:00 AM

Oh dear....Deb, the comment below is for Russell... I don't know how this happens. Anyway, thanks for your lovely post! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 5:21:00 AM

Why thank you, Russell. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I so wanted to find the write words for this one. I don't know if it fits all the haiku demands...I just wanted to write! :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/14/2013 10:09:00 PM

Yes, the moon blushes, I can visualize this perfectly, and after the lovers bond together at night under the stars! You have painted a perfect picture one that I was able to feel by the words of this tender poem! I really loved reading this delightful piece this evening! You have presented a glorious poem, one that touched my heart, Great Work!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/15/2013 5:28:00 AM

Why thank you, Russell. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I so wanted to find the write words for this one. I don't know if it fits all the haiku demands...I just wanted to write! :)

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