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Found all year in most parts of range, but some withdraw in winter from northern and higher-elevation areas. Every year, a few spend the winter well to the east along the Gulf Coast, and west to the California coast. Vermilion Flycatcher

Write Five Beautiful Lines Contest

^{Sposonered by Constance Le France}

^3.13.25

^{First Place}

In The Moment… I’m elevated and aroused, doused in scenic sensations Tickling my ears are the sounds of vermilions chirping Jasmine incense redolence pure pleasance The lasting impressions of a passerby’s stirring smile while waving back at the doe-eyed carefree child

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/18/2025 6:37:00 PM

Your poem is as vibrant as the bird .. CayCay

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/19/2025 12:20:00 PM

Ty CayCay!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/15/2025 9:46:00 AM

Lovely lines about a beautiful bird Anaya. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Beryl

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/16/2025 3:18:00 PM

Belle, Ty! The bird included, yes, although not a personification. The experiences in the moments. xhugs

Jim Healey

Date: 3/15/2025 9:41:00 AM

Wonderful, vivid description. Congratulations.

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/16/2025 3:17:00 PM

Hello Jim, Ty!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/15/2025 4:16:00 AM

That was superb. Hugs.

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/16/2025 3:13:00 PM

Hugs Victor! ty

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2025 2:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful win poem, Anaya :) - hugs

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/16/2025 3:13:00 PM

Ty, Anne! for the kind words xhugs

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/15/2025 2:24:00 AM

doe-eyed - Ah! congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/16/2025 2:17:00 PM

Ty Thriveni, I can't thank you enough for all of your support it's encouraging me. Cheers!

Hiba Junaid

Date: 3/15/2025 12:52:00 AM

I love your imagery, Anaya. The bird is truly quite beautiful, but your words are just exquisite: "Jasmine incense redolence," "vermilions chirping" are striking and pleasurable to the eye. Thanks for sharing. (Also, I saw in your response to Duke that you are self-taught - I'm self-taught too. Doesn't make you any less of a poet my friend. You are a very talented poetess)

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/16/2025 2:22:00 PM

Hiba, belated thank you's! I thought I'd have a go at it, when I read some of the beautiful poetry, i jumped right into it! I think I've come a long way and feel much confidence. Ty, Hiba and good luck to as well ~Anaya

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/13/2025 4:44:00 PM

really beautiful bird, never seen or heard before, thanks for making me discovering

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/13/2025 5:00:00 PM

Yann, I feel such a good vibe when you visit I am starting a bird series and am warming up, this bird's uniqueness is it's a flycatcher. I'll do the research as long as you delight in it! TY! be there soon :D

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/13/2025 3:49:00 PM

Anaya, you've captured much more than the beautiful bird. The reactions you've noticed only hint at your power of perception. Thanks for sharing and smiles!!!

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/13/2025 5:11:00 PM

I'm just getting started on a bird series, in order to learn something new. I want to explore what bird watchers see, first I'm taking time to identify them thru the internet, why not. Duke, I've stayed 4 yrs and am a self-taught poetess, never have I admitted i'm a poet it is with your help. Smiles back at you ...

Tom Woody

Date: 3/13/2025 3:38:00 PM

Multi-sensory extravaganza! There are some really cool birds here in Florida we don't get to see in Ohio. Fascinating flyers

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/13/2025 5:14:00 PM

Florida, hey Tommy I hope that you both are doing well and enjoying your travels, you sound refreshed, I can tell in your comments lately, I'm truly happy for you!! Thanks for your ongoing support ~ stay safe!