in the moment

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Poetry/Free Verse/in the moment
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1697-464-01
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, January 01, 2025
For the International Contest, CHOOSE A 2025 POSTED POEM
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/04/2025

Third Place

"and birds twitter like whispering violins ..."

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flowers near the window
in bright yellow

a filmy white curtain
swaying in the breeze

late afternoon sunshine
bouncing off walls

a tea pot steaming 
a tea cup empty

a book lying open
on a vintage bed 

colour glass vases
sparkling in the sun

a tranquil silence
fills the space

photographs
on dresser

purple walls
need paint

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Margaret Foster

Date: 1/4/2025 6:19:00 AM

I see you sitting there in tranquil silence gazing around the perfect room, and then….hmm “ these walls need painting “ lol. Lovely verse Constance congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2025 1:48:00 PM