Nette Onclaud Poet Romanticism

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Ink Empress' Heat of the Heartbeat' Contest ...21 June 26

In The Mists Of Your Eyes

Haunted by your gasps come eventide
     the shimmer of vour shirt climbs
 and rugged flesh of your torso
 Traces those hips 
as I fondle the crease from your spine
... to fine mold Brach's melody,
  its mellow refrains accompanying 
             spatter of viscous honey ;

In a voice of sizzling quiet
that makes your arms part my sea ,
I inhabit wedded bliss in the mists of your eyes
    and night's starglow melts before me:
This fragrance of total surrender
  leads me to one , undefined moment 
  while I blossom delicately---
 until we tremble as one

       my nectar overflowing.

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Ravindra K Kapoor July 4, 2026 at 9:43 AM You have beautifully penned this sensuous poetry. My good wishes for your contest entry. With best wishes...... Ravindra K Kapoor

Ink Empress July 1, 2026 at 1:47 AM So many beautiful lines in this dear Nette, I especially love "In a voice of sizzling quiet that makes your arms part my sea , I inhabit wedded bliss in the mists of your eyes" so passionate! And touching! Thank you for supporting my contests, Pleasure reading, Congratulations on your win Sending you light always ~

Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2026 at 4:16 PM Wow so sensual. Love this. Congrats

Paige Hind June 25, 2026 at 8:22 PM romance incarnate :)

CayCay Godwin June 21, 2026 at 2:24 PM HOT STUFF, steam rises from my computer and so poetically climatic, sigh...

Sotto Poet June 21, 2026 at 10:39 AM With a joyful end, "This fragrance of total surrender leads me to one, undefined moment while I blossom delicately--- until we tremble as one," the heart always recalls the soul's sighs and the melodic rhythm of its heartbeat. Wonderful pen, Good luck in the contest.

Silent One June 21, 2026 at 6:57 AM Oooh now this is hot and sensual... That last stanza especially, with lines that read ' that 'makes your arms part my sea' and while I blossom delicately.... until we tremble as one... Damn... I know this sponsor likes sensual poetry, so I can see this one finishing on top.... Excellent poetry dear poetess..

Quoth Theraven June 20, 2026 at 10:21 PM Hello Nette, Just a thought; I'll have to teach my spell checker more respect. I'm not at all sorry to find this sweet mist. In fact, if there's ever a chance to save a brave world in love, it's this. -Richard

Alison A Smith June 20, 2026 at 9:49 PM Definite beat of the heartbeat found in the mists of your eyes.