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In the Mist of Love

For my wife

In the mist of love
Time and Beauty age
but when passion galore
our love glows with rage
as we swore
incinerate any weed
which sprouts upon what we establish
with our deed
we cherish
The feelings we feel
the pain the laughter
even when we are dead we’ll still fulfill
this love complement each other
within this passion of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/4/2018 8:46:00 AM
your poems are a testament that marriage can and does work; very optimistic and nicely-penned. It feels so truthful and wise.
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:38:00 AM
Even when we are dead we will still fulfill this love complement each other. Yes, you captured the true essence of love in that line, Itumeleng. very nice indeed.
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Itumeleng Cangua
Date: 7/9/2018 7:05:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment.
Date: 4/18/2018 7:19:00 AM
Hello Itumeleng, lovely poem.It flows very well. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.
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Itumeleng Cangua
Date: 7/9/2018 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 8/2/2017 5:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem and tribute to your wife. Great Write!
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Itumeleng Cangua
Date: 8/10/2017 5:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Sir. I intend to improve in that field.

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