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In the Mist of Love

For my wife In the mist of love Time and Beauty age but when passion galore our love glows with rage as we swore incinerate any weed which sprouts upon what we establish with our deed we cherish The feelings we feel the pain the laughter even when we are dead we’ll still fulfill this love complement each other within this passion of love

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Date: 12/4/2018 8:46:00 AM
your poems are a testament that marriage can and does work; very optimistic and nicely-penned. It feels so truthful and wise.
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:38:00 AM
Even when we are dead we will still fulfill this love complement each other. Yes, you captured the true essence of love in that line, Itumeleng. very nice indeed.
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Itumeleng Cangua
Date: 7/9/2018 7:05:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment.
Date: 4/18/2018 7:19:00 AM
Hello Itumeleng, lovely poem.It flows very well. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.
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Itumeleng Cangua
Date: 7/9/2018 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 8/2/2017 5:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem and tribute to your wife. Great Write!
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Itumeleng Cangua
Date: 8/10/2017 5:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Sir. I intend to improve in that field.

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