In the Mist of Love

For my wife

In the mist of love
Time and Beauty age
but when passion galore
our love glows with rage
as we swore
incinerate any weed
which sprouts upon what we establish
with our deed
we cherish
The feelings we feel
the pain the laughter
even when we are dead we’ll still fulfill
this love complement each other
within this passion of love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 4, 2018 at 8:46 AM
your poems are a testament that marriage can and does work; very optimistic and nicely-penned. It feels so truthful and wise.
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May 7, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Even when we are dead we will still fulfill this love complement each other. Yes, you captured the true essence of love in that line, Itumeleng. very nice indeed.
Cangua Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:05 AM
Thanks for the compliment.
Kgaswane Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Hello Itumeleng, lovely poem.It flows very well. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.
Cangua Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Thank you so much.
Sergi Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 5:59 PM
Beautiful poem and tribute to your wife. Great Write!
Cangua Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 5:33 AM
Thank you so much Sir. I intend to improve in that field.
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