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In the Mist

in the mist - sure-footed - a doe approaches the buck near father's grave

Andrea Dietrich
for Monoku Contest
Inspired by Constance ~ a Rambling Poet ~

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Harry Horsman

May 30, 2012 at 10:26 AM

hmmm, this give one such a lot to ponder on, this is really good, harry

Noel Villarosa

December 18, 2010 at 2:52 AM

Congratulations, Andrea on your success for this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Iolanda Scripca

December 16, 2010 at 7:22 PM

I can picture this scene frosen in a painting...just beautiful! Great Monoku here, dear Andrea. Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Sara Kendrick

December 16, 2010 at 3:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...Sara

Constance La France

December 15, 2010 at 1:56 PM

Congratulations on third place in my contest, this line is like watching a picture unfold ~~

Carrie Richards

December 15, 2010 at 12:51 PM

sounds like a line from a great novel!! Nicely done, Andrea!

Francine Roberts

December 15, 2010 at 8:39 AM

beautiful imagery, congrats on your win in the contest Andrea

Daniel Cwiak

December 15, 2010 at 8:27 AM

Exceptionally vivid description in one line, Andrea. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Audrey Haick

December 15, 2010 at 8:09 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest, Andrea! Have a great day, "Busy Bee" lol Love, Audrey

Eamon Duffin

December 15, 2010 at 6:46 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

December 15, 2010 at 3:39 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy, andrea… nette

Tahera Mannan

December 14, 2010 at 10:49 PM

Many congratulations for this super win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 14, 2010 at 7:35 PM

Congrats Andrea on your super win in the One Liner contest with this eloquent line my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

John Freeman

December 14, 2010 at 5:39 PM

Congratulations Andera on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Deb Radke

December 14, 2010 at 2:53 PM

Andrea, I wish I had written earlier how beautiful I thought this monoku was written. How haunting and visual, without being written that way. You've done it all with the words... Congratulations on your win in the monoku contest.

James Fraser

December 14, 2010 at 1:59 PM

Sad, but beautiful Andrea. I can hear it being narrated in a short movie about the deer. Congrats on your win in Constance's contest >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 14, 2010 at 5:31 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 13, 2010 at 3:50 PM

thankxx Andrea for all your cool comments and well wishes for the contests and their entries... appreciate all the support and enthusiasm u bring to my work... thankxx from Ron and Me too ..received today and am anxious to read everything sent... enjoy some terrific holidays my friend so dear ..with luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

December 11, 2010 at 10:08 AM

unique yet natural and very poetic in my mind's eye. I can and did linger there a while, Andrea.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

December 10, 2010 at 1:42 PM

So nice want to tell you your words inspire me to do better.Thanks Andrea for your comment.Your friend Teresa

Debbie Guzzi

December 9, 2010 at 2:21 PM

made me shiver!! Good luck Andie. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

December 7, 2010 at 4:40 PM

Good one that reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest...This expresses great emotion..I was delighted that you found time to stop by my work and my blog today...Sara