Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Free verse

In the Midst of Summers Sin

Of the distance, 
beauty appeared at peace, calmly resting. 
Proximity grew closer to this human figurine; 
lengthy legs painted in ocean blue jeans.
The thesis statement to male's eyes in dreams.

But those legs...
Those legs were the topic of my eyes
Pupils conversing in-between her inner thighs
The rhetorical tongue eager to submit beneath sun rise
Thickened bridled muscle strengthens to rise
I mean d*** Oh me! Oh myy!

Oooo wee such a beautiful sexy queen.
Envisioning, 
If at current, her faucet is running. ..
Slow-ly d
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                g or simply leak-ing
So the fleshes hydration can be full-filling.
Muscles within muscles while warm liquid falling?
Can we start engaging?

Lips connect; gently kissing... (Pause)

But the guiltiness in the minds eye began interrupting
Spirit intervening
Muscles deflating
Suddenly,  no tempting to the extent of no lusting
Corrective vision restoring
Walking through the escape door from fornicating...whew!

As the moon tiptoes in
Eyes close and knees bend
The darkened closet within
Praying to overcome this certain sin
That I indeed struggle in
And that I may be born again
This I pray, from day to day...Amen

INK-U-SCRIPT
06-04-2014

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Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 12:24 AM Ahhh temptation is so sweet at times and the way you describes this was like wow! How could you walk away! Are you always tempted as such? Do you always walk away? Lol just questions I wonder about I guess! Love your words! Can't wait to read a new one of yours!;) Pace Ink-U-Script November 2, 2019 at 11:59 AM I wouldn’t say always, but there have been quite a few times in the past when being tempted. I think I’m rather strong to not give in at this point of my life. It would probably take a lot more than spoiling me for me to give in. And who spoils people nowadays..Hahaha Thanks for the comments

Rob Carmack January 26, 2016 at 7:36 PM Truly a miracle when a man is so close and ready, but is able to walk away from such a thing. Once, I was able, but even those times when I didn't, each move was choice. Excellent capture in this poem.

Liam Mcdaid October 28, 2014 at 4:49 AM powerful piece of writing really love how you drew this very beautifully penned

Lucilla Carrillo June 17, 2014 at 7:21 AM A great poem, great imagination. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Jslambert Mister Roboto June 13, 2014 at 11:43 PM be glad you didn't bake her a cream-pie pimpin'...mo' kids mo' problems. That's my WURD~ ~JSL

Sarah Herring June 13, 2014 at 1:59 PM This is masterfully written. This should be in a movie! Perfect wording. Pace Ink-U-Script June 13, 2014 at 11:10 PM Thank you dearly for stopping by my poems today...Means a lot! !!! Huggs.

Mark Peterson June 10, 2014 at 2:10 PM A masterful blend of self-betrayal and realization, culminating in sorrow and reconciliation. Indeed, Amen. Read my poem "Apotheosis," which has similar themes.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2014 at 1:29 PM - "Oooo wee such a beautiful sexy ...." poem!!! - Really glad I visited your poetry today .... - AMEN !! ( :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

A.E. Rivenbark June 9, 2014 at 10:06 PM Ooo this is hot, fanning myself right now. Fantastic.

Latosha Mitchell June 9, 2014 at 11:32 AM Temptation is very powerful and it is something we all deal with at some point. I know how easily men give in to temptation, especially in the summer months. It can be avoided with self-control and I love the way you showed that control in the end. Nice write! :-)

Carl Fraser June 9, 2014 at 8:53 AM This piece sizzles Ink, very very well expressed what the inner urges of a man can be like. Blessings Carl

Carl Fraser June 9, 2014 at 8:52 AM This piece sizzles Ink, very very well expressed what the inner urges of a man can be like. Blessings Carl

Kelly Deschler June 8, 2014 at 3:24 PM Sometimes, temptation can be avoided with respect, and you expressed that so well here....Very creative wording with a smooth flow. An excellent write, Pace!

Malkavian Raven June 7, 2014 at 11:08 PM Your spirituality is much stronger than mine, always so easily tempted by the flesh due to my voluntary seclusion. Perhaps I'll store this away somewhere in my mind, should the occasion arise in the near future, I can stave off any impulse. Beautifully written, Pace. - Raven

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2014 at 10:35 AM Painting man's sweet sin in a very sensuous way, Pace. Glad to see it was resisted! I loved the description of her "lengthy legs painted in ocean blue jeans."

Connie Marcum Wong June 5, 2014 at 6:56 PM A sensuous and outstanding write that took me on a lustful intriguing journey. There wasn't anything left to imagine except from your ending!

Nette Onclaud June 4, 2014 at 4:40 PM naughty boy.. now say your penance, lol.. sizzling write, pace.. whoo!... huggs Pace Ink-U-Script June 5, 2014 at 2:13 PM Huggs Nette..Thank you for stopping by always!!!

Casarah Nance June 4, 2014 at 3:38 PM What a temptation. So entrancingly described I would have even given in to it. But the reality of ending it, closing the door, oh a struggle indeed when faced with such a temptation, good of you to reject it, kudos to you for describing it so well. Pace Ink-U-Script June 5, 2014 at 2:17 PM lol...I agree with your first line.(guilty me) lol Love your comment and thank you for stopping by.

Pandita Sietesantos June 4, 2014 at 12:01 PM Hot, hot, hot - whew!!!! Well done, my friend - steamy write:) Pace Ink-U-Script June 5, 2014 at 2:11 PM Thank you for the support!!! I really appreciate it!