In the Midst of Love's Wing

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I love the " Monorhyme " form and I love the "Spring" season. This was my way of celebrating them both. I hope you all like what I came up with. Enjoy:-)

We fell madly in love in the Spring Next, you became my everything By next spring you gave me a ring You fill my heart and soul with zing I knew you were not just a mere fling My darling you make my heart sing I’m your Queen and you are my King We are in the midst of love’s wing All because well in love in the Spring 4-16-18 Alexis Y

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John Gondolf

Date: 4/18/2018 12:11:00 PM

Alexis, a wonderful celebration of spring and love, the two seem to go hand in hand. John

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/16/2018 7:27:00 PM

Love is in the air, especially in Spring.. A lovely and romantic poem in form and content, Alexis. Enjoyed! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/16/2018 6:11:00 PM

Very romantic offering for spring, Alexis. A most appropriate time for this poetic vibe. Splendid write. Love and more love always.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/16/2018 3:39:00 PM

adorable read about love in spring, alexis.. huggs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/16/2018 11:17:00 AM

Certainly enjoyed reading about love in spring..especially in mono-rhyme..well done, Alexis.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/16/2018 9:01:00 AM

A lovely time to fall in love Alexis when everything is starting to come to life. Tom