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In the Mall

I used to love to shop in malls, Alone or with a friend, To stroll or browse, not thinking Such an outing might soon end. The food court always beckoned For a pick-me-up or snack, And then the shopping would resume, Perusing every rack. When Amazon became a thing, With ordering a breeze, The customers dried up, which brought The mall shops to their knees. I visited a mall today, First time in many moons, And it was not the same as where I once spent afternoons. The stores were there (well, most of them) But in that vast, bright space, The emptiness made those of us Inside look out of place. What online started, Covid then Made sure was good and dead. What’s left is just the memory Remaining in its stead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 8/7/2022 10:51:00 PM
I think the pandemic "brought the mall to its knees" here - I know that is when I stopped going. But Amazon was ready to pick me up, and they ran with me.
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Date: 7/29/2022 2:49:00 AM
Unfortunately, it's not just the shopping malls that have changed, but many other things in life, Ilene. Accepting the fact that life will never be the same again can be hard to swallow! ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 7/28/2022 6:31:00 PM
As the price of petrol soars, more people will shop online. My daughter just sent me a jar of coffee, but with the new postal rates, it costs more to mail it than buy it! Great rhyme, Ilene! Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/28/2022 3:16:00 PM
I love this ilene and so very true. Who would have thought in years gone by that this would be happening?!! Written and said beautifully…..Debx
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Date: 7/28/2022 1:14:00 PM
It was the death knell for malls and the high Street shops when online shopping took off and the thing it has made us lazy, but I suppose its the future of shopping. Tom
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Date: 7/28/2022 1:12:00 PM
Excellent picture of what is happening to box stores, Ilene. It's a shame, I think, but I don't think it's going to change. The on-line shops are proliferating like rabbits.
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Date: 7/28/2022 11:19:00 AM
Good one, Ilene. One of my favorite restaurants, Ruby Tuesdays, is in our only mall here, and that's the only reason I go there these days. Amazon has, indeed, become a virtual one-stop shopping mecca for me.
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